"I'm sorry that just because you can control an element and are pretty much a god you think you're better than me." Jasper thought over what he just said. "oh nevermind. I have always wanted to make a difference in this world, make a name for myself, you know what I'm talking about, and when I got this invitation I thought it would be the perfect chance." He stopped and looked Zoe in the eyes. " I want you to know that I will do this on my own. I don't need your help."
( This thing, like wuuuuuuuuuuttttttt does THAT have to do with anything?)
(I'm just trying to stick to my character I'm not trying to be mean.)
" Well that depends, IF we want to get murder." She spat out.
i am actually dying from this grammar stop irking me
(Okay lets pause, I'm guessing zoe/maddie's parents got killed by humans? apparently to the RP start paragraph humans only come when tasked to save to world so I'm not too sure about that… It's something that Hope would have to clearify, and I get what Jasper is saying I think)
( Maddie's mother got killed by some mean humans just to clearify.)
" Well that depends, IF we want to get murder." She spat out.
i am actually dying from this grammar stop irking me
( Well I'm sorry, I usually write without grammer sometimes.)
Jasper in reply to Oscar "I would greatly appreciate your help and would love to help you. I'm not trying to be mean."
( I need someone to explain this to me.)
( I need someone to explain this to me.)
I'm not sure what there is to explain.
( I also mean no offense. She's just like that around humans and she is usually nice.)
"I'm sorry that just because you can control an element and are pretty much a god you think you're better than me." Jasper thought over what he just said. "oh nevermind. I have always wanted to make a difference in this world, make a name for myself, you know what I'm talking about, and when I got this invitation I thought it would be the perfect chance." He stopped and looked Zoe in the eyes. " I want you to know that I will do this on my own. I don't need your help."
( That^)
what about it?? Jasper is a human and wants to save the world but doesn't understand the responsibilities and risks of it
(Please leave @Nerd_Girl2.0. I'll give you one more chance)
( If I did something wrong, I'm sorry and I didn't mean it….)
Oscar felt nervous being between Jasper and (Zoe or maddie?). He turned to Jasper, "He took my Mum. The man we have to stop. So if you're gonna stop him, for sure, then I need to be with you. But I can't know if you will or Lupita and Adrianna and everybody else will. I don't know who to…" His eyes darted between everyone. Oscar took a deep breath, "We need to stick together."
Yoshi grew a thin but strong vine around Jasper's foot, "You go- I go. Don't go. Not fast."
Oscar felt nervous being between Jasper and (Zoe or maddie?). He turned to Jasper, "He took my Mum. The man we have to stop. So if you're gonna stop him, for sure, then I need to be with you. But I can't know if you will or Lupita and Adrianna and everybody else will. I don't know who to…" His eyes darted between everyone. Oscar took a deep breath, "We need to stick together."
Yoshi grew a thin but strong vine around Jasper's foot, "You go- I go. Don't go. Not fast."
( You know what…. uhhhh Im going to use Zoe because now it is a habbit??)
Zoe looked at Oscar and then she sighed. "Fine, if Oscar is going then I'll go." She replied stubbornly.
"Wait what? I'm not leaving Lupita and the others, we need to sti-" A sudden booming echoed around the room from the main doors, making Oscar jump. He quickly moved, hiding behind Adrianna again.
( Wait did everyone not agree? I thought we did.)
( Oh whoops sorry. Lets ignored this ever happened.) Zoe looked nervously towards the door. "Ummm whats behind there?"
"A really big man." Oscar mumbled.
(He's Lupita's Dad, the king)
( Yeah, I know.)
"Should we be worried or what?" She asked unsure of herself.
