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idk it was just a Wikipedia page and it was weird but funny without any explanation so neh idk

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oh then the link you put is wrong bks it goes to a Wikipedia page

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then if it is fanfic I would totally read it just give me link

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Chapter 1
Hermione´s Pov:

The War Was Finally Over! Harry Had Killed Voldemort but that didn´t mean all the hurt and pain was gone . No, the war may have been over, but the pain was just beginning. I slowly dropped my wand from my hand and walked away from it, leaving it behind. I didn´t want to be anywhere near that life-ending machine and right now I didn´t care if I ever used magic again. Those lives I killed, sure they may have been our enemies, and sure they may have deserved it. But I didn´t want to be the one to do it I sat down on a pile of rubble and looked around, Everyone mourning for thier loved ones. I closed my eyes Gently, hoping that this was all just a bad dream.

¨Hey¨ I hear a voice say.

I open my eyes and look towards the voice. ¨Hey¨ I repeat back.

Ron sits down next to me, so close our thighs were touching.

¨Please tell me this is all a dream, A really bad dream¨ I Pleaded him.

Ron's Pov:

Hermione´s words hit me. She was hurting and I couldn´t help her. I couldn´t take the pain away I wish I could take her pain and transfer it to me, but I couldn´t, and it pained me. I slipped my arm around her waist and she layed her head on my shoulder. I felt so useless like…… like a weasley….. I just pulled Hermione close to me.

Hermione´s Pov:

I felt Ron wrap his arm around me so I layed my head on his shoulder my eyes drifted to the dark sky and I closed them feeling the wind brush against my my face. A tear Trickled down my cheek as I thought about all the people who died during the war, Lupin,Tonks,Snape,lavendar, even poor little Collin lost his life in the war. I quickly opened my eyes to the sound of Mrs. Weasley screaming. Ron and I quickly stood up and ran to Mrs., weasley, picking up my wand on the way. Once we were over with the rest of the weasleys, I was about to ask what was wrong when I gasped in horror. Fred was kneeled next to a body and Ginny was sobbing into Harry's chest. I stepped forward and saw that the body lying there was no other than George Weasley.

¨Well let you say goodbye¨ Mrs. weasley said.

The rest of the weasleys as well as Harry slowly walked away, but I stood there not wanting to leave Fred alone.

¨Georgie wake up! it's not funny anymore¨ Fred said through his sobs.

I kneeled down and placed my hand on Fred's shoulder ¨Fred……¨ I Said tears swelling up in my eyes.

¨Hermione he's not waking up! Tell him to wake up!¨

I slowly closed my eyes ¨Fred…George H-he's Gone¨. I Stuttered. I never stutter , only when I´m scared , but I haven´t been scared in a long time

¨Don´t Say That¨ Fred said sounding a bit annoyed. ¨THE JOKES OVER GEORGE¨ Fred screamed. ¨Please….Georgie ¨ he said in a soft voice, leaning onto George ,sobbing into his chest.

I looked at Fred before looking at George's pale lifeless face. I felt like crying but for freds sake I fought the tears ¨Fred I know how you feel I-¨ I started to say but Fred snapped his head to me which shut me up ¨You have no idea how I feel My brother is lying here not moving, not breathing. you have no idea how that feels you don´t have a family¨ Fred said angrily..

My breath got caught in my throat at his words. Fred slowly turned his head back to his brother. quickly stood up and walked away at a quick pace. I kept walking and didn´t stop until I was far enough away that no one could hear my cries. I sat on a pile of rubble once more. I pulled my knees up to my chest then tucked my head and bawled my eyes out. I was going to sob until I couldn´t anymore. I had held back the hurt for so long that I couldn´t hold it in anymore. I let the tears flow down my cheek. I heard the sound of footsteps coming near and I wiped my wet cheeks, which only smeared the blood that was all over my face

¨Granger? ¨ I heard a voice say and I looked up to see who it was coming from.

Chapter 2
Fred´s Pov:

I watched Hermione walk away and mentally slapped myself. How could I say that to her? I at least had other family, she didn´t, she was all alone. I looked at George one last time.

¨Wait for me Georgie¨ I said before closing his grey dull eyes.

I stood up and looked around for Hermione but she was no where to be seen. I rushed over to Ron,Harry, and Ginny ¨ Have you guys seen Hermione?¨ I asked all three of them and they all shooke thier head. I sighed and walked away. I´ll just wait for her to come back, give her time to calm down. She´ll come back……..right?

Draco´s Pov:

I was walking, looking down at my feet, trying to avoid all the dead bodies around me, when the I heard sounds of a female crying and I looked over to see Hermione

¨Granger?¨ I asked trying to make out who it was.

Hermione looked up as I spoke. ¨What do you want Malfoy?¨ She asked.

I slowly walked over to her and sat beside her. I expected her to push me away but she scooted closer to me. I started to shake a little as I put my arm around her. I was so scared she was gonna hex me but she didn´t she layed her head on my shoulder and I sighed in relief.

¨Um…I´m sorry about that… Ahem¨ I said and she sighed.

¨I know¨ she said.

I patted her head stood up and stretched ¨Come on… I want to show you something¨.

I put my hand out to her. Hermione smiled gently and grabbed my hand. I held her hand tightly and started to walk north. Iheld her closley, I fet strange towards her, I felt as if I had to protect her. I continued to walk with a smile on my face , but at the same time I felt terribile for doing all the things I did. I felt Hermione rub her thumb over my knuckles and I looked down at our hands.

I made a small smile ¨Close your eyes, please¨

Hermione to my suprize obeyed and my smile grew even wider. I heped her walk down the stairs and stood in the middle of a white rose field. I looked at Hermione as she gasped in awe.

¨D-Draco it´s beautiful¨ Hermione said and I smiled widley.

¨I come here when I´m sad It makes me feel better!¨ I said

Hermione smiled as she looked at me.

I smiled back and looked around¨ I´m sorry for the things I´ve done to you guys¨ I said and looked away with tears in my eyes¨ I have feelings, I really do….They…..They made me like this, I said.

I felt hermione hug me and my heart felt like it was burning. I then started to sob

¨Everyone Hates Me!¨ I sobbed out

¨I don´t Hate you Draco¨Hermione said.

My eyes widened and I hugged her tightly, sobbing.

¨Don´t cry¨ she said rubbing my back.

¨Okay ¨ I said wiping my tears away and smiling.

¨There´s that dashing smile¨ Hermione said

I smiled proudly as I laughed,

I see Hermione smile ¨ I believe your a good guy when you wanna be¨"Hermione said.

¨Thank you that means alot, I´ll try harder next time,¨ I told her.

I see Hermione crouch down and pick up a white rose. I look at her then sit down. She sits down next to me and puts the rose behind my ear..

¨Thank you¨ I say and smile at her.

¨For what?¨ Hermione asks me.

¨For everything…. I want to become a better person now¨ I told her.

¨I can help you with that Draco¨ Hermione told me and I smiled.

¨How can I do it?¨ I asked her as I tilted my head.

¨You have to show people your not Souless¨ she said

I sighed and let go of her hand.

Hermione´s Pov:

Draco Malfoy, I thought he was nothing more that a heartless snake, but he wasn´t. He was so much more, he had a heart under all those scales.

I looked at Draco as he let go of my hand and sighed

¨Hey it´ll be okay it´s not your fault¨ I said while rubbing his back.

¨Hermione-¨ Draco started to say but I cut in.

¨NO! Draco it´s not your fault and don´t let anyone tell you otherwise¨ I said to him and saw him smile gently.

¨Your something else Granger¨ Draco said, which caused me to smile.

I looked behind me and saw Darkness and sighed. ¨ I should probally get going before they come looking for me.¨

¨Yeah you don´t want Weaselbee to go into cardiac arrest¨ Draco said with a chuckle.

I stood up from my spot on the ground¨ Goodbye Draco¨ I said as I walked out of the beautiful rose field and into the horrible war zone.

Fred´s Pov:

I was so worried that what I said had affected her so much that she wasn´t going to come back. I sat down on the hard concrete covered in Rubble as I hoped for her to come back. I finally saw Hermione come into view and I sighed a breath of relief. I quickly got up and swiftly walked over to her. As I neared closer I saw that she had a small smile plastered on her lips. I was about to run up and hug her, but before I could get to her Harry, Ginny, and Ron were in front of me, Hugging Hermione before I could blink and I turned and walked away.

Harry´s Pov:

I saw Hermione and quickly ran to her Ron and ginny close behind. As soon as I got to Hermione I wrapped my arms around her, hugging her. She slowly wrapped her arms around my back. I knew Ron and Ginny were Death glaring me, but I didn´t care I was so scared Hermione wasn´t gonna make it through the war, but she did. I slowly let go of Hermione and looked around at our dead friends and shook my head.

¨This is all Malfoys fault if he would´ve stood up to his father, Maybe, maybe collin would be alive, Maybe, Snape would be alive, Maybe George would be alive¨ I said.

Hermione´s pov:

I felt hurt and I didn´t know why Harry´s words felt like I just had my heart ripped out of my chest. I closed my eyes gently

¨You Okay?¨ Harry asked me.

¨I´m fine¨ I responded and opened my eyes.

Harry´s head quickly turned to the side and I looked too. I saw Draco walking away with his mother and father.

¨Let´s end all the Malfoys right here, right now¨ Ron said bitterly pointing it at Draco.

Chapter 3
Fred´s Pov: I saw Harry and Hermione Hugging and I….I just felt so Jealous and I don´t know why. Hermione´s with Ron and Harry´s Gay. So I don´t know why I was jealous, I don´t even like Hermione, I don´t think.

Hermione´s Pov:

I saw Ron pull out his wand.

¨Ron….He´s not worth it¨ Harry said, but Ron didn´t lower his wand.

I slowly and quietly pulled out my wand and pointed it at the Malfoys ¨Protego"I whispered putting a protective over Draco, Narissa, and Lucius before putting my wand back at my side.

¨Crucio¨Ron shouted firing his at the Malfoys which had no affect on them.

I smiled at the result and looked at Draco noticing he still had the white rose behind his ear.

¨Someone must have used a protection spell on them¨ Ron said, seeming quite frustrated.

I heard Harry sigh ¨We don´t need anymore dead bodies right now¨ Harry said.

I looked over to Ginny who hadn´t said a word. I started to walk over to her but she shook her head and walked off. I sighed as she walked off.

¨Give her time ¨ Ron said.

I nodded and Looked around. ¨I´m gonna go for a walk¨ I told the boys.

¨Hermione you already vanished once and I was so worried, Please Don´t go¨ Ron said grabbing one of my hands.

I closed my eyes and sighed, ¨Ronald, Please ¨ I said jerking my hand away ¨Now is not the time¨ I said and walked away.

Ron´s Pov:

Hermione jerked her hand from my grasp and walked away. I watched her leave and sighed.

¨Don´t worry mate she just needs time¨ Harry said patting me on the shoulder, but i wasn´t so sure.

Fred´s Pov:

I saw Hermione walking by herself and I swiftly ran to catch up to her¨Her-¨I started to say.

¨Forget about it Fred¨ she said cutting me off.

I grabbed both her shoulders firmly and turned her around to face me. I looked into her eyes.¨ No Hermione I won´t forget about it I hurt you, I didn´t mean what I said and I truly am sorry¨ I said to her

Hermione´s lips went up into a smile and I smiled back at her.

Hermione´s Pov:

Fred Weasley was an immature prankster, I never knew when he was joking or not, but right now as he looked into my eyes. I knew he wasn´t joking, that he was being sincere.

´you were just upset¨ I told him.

¨But I shouldn´t have tsken it out on you¨ Fred said to me.

I wraped my arms around Fred as he did the same.

¨ What are you doing¨ I heard a voice ask.

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SO this is really intense and I know you put a lot of hard work and that you are a good fan of Harry Potter and I haven't read or watched all the movies or books and ur fanfic just slapped me in the face and told me "you have to read or watch Harry Potter right now" so thanks about that

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so can you recommend me to see the movies first or read the books first?

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Just make sure that you write with quotation marks and stuff instead of accents. You may need to go to your settings and turn off international keyboard and switch it to US keyboard.
Fred´s Pov: (The ´ should be a ')

I saw Hermione walking by herself and I swiftly ran to catch up to her¨Her-¨I started to say.

¨Forget about it Fred¨ she said cutting me off.
(¨ should be ")

Oh and another quick tip: You wanna put a comma after what a character says when you have a description after their quote. Using the one above for example:

"Forget about it Fred," she said, cutting me off.