“ why do you ask, you Afriad of me” she sort of held back a laugh I guess I can be scary she then began to taunt the girl “come on I won’t hurt you I’m only a child of Hephaestus, if you really are scared we can keep a shortstop rule in effect”
(Sorry!)
(…..)
He sat down, looking at them
(lol i cant wait to see noels reaction.)
(I should probably go do my own bye for now)
Ben vibed, wondering if he would fit in
(My dude, pls be patient)
(I am)
(Ok, just sayin)
(Anyway, just taking a tiny break)
She raised an eyebrow in amusement. “Hah, no. I just need a diverse group of samples. Hmm, now that I think about it, I might need samples from the entire camp.”
“Noel…” Alister flashed a concerned glance.
“Hey! Don’t give me that look.” She gave him a look of of annoyance before looking between Wynn and Mya. “You’re both Haephestus, huh? Ok…” her eyes traveled over to the new kid. “Who’s your godly parent?”
"Zeus." He shivered, nervously holding up the sword that Zeus had struck.
"A 'child of the big three'" He said, not knowing what that meant exactly.
"And you?"
(Hey could you try to give more extensive responses so other people have more stuff to work with)
(I don’t think that’s what they meant……..)
(I don’t think that’s what they meant……..)
(I don't write paragraphs…)
(Add things like expression and how your character speaks and the emotions that the character shows when he speaks)
(Well why don’t you?)
(You don’t need a paragraph, here’s an example for how he could respond,
ben spoke with a little bravado in his words “ well I’m the child of zues”
you don’t have to right like that immediately it takes practice)
(One thing that helps is how does he show his interaction)
"Zeus." He shivered, nervously holding up the sword that Zeus had struck.
"A 'child of the big three'" He said, not knowing what that meant exactly.
"And you?"
(Does that work?)
(Yeah thats better, as I said just practice and your writing will get better)
(Okay, thanks!!)
Wynn just kinda stood there before going over to alister.
"Spar?" he asked him, reaching for death and suffocation.
(Alright that’s fine)
“Oooh! A child of the big three?” Her eyes widened with eagerness. “I’m totally gonna want a blood sample from you!”
“El, he’s not a rat you can experiment on,” Alister said exasperatedly. “We’re children of Athena, by the way.”
“I know that!” She grinned, dancing on her heels. “I’m just excited.”
(Oops hold up-)