(Hey, the curse words are censored in this. It's PG so try making your word like this: **)(I don't care if you leave the first letter, but my mom doesn't like me participating in RP's where I read curse words regularly :P)(Thanks)
Oh, sorry. Figured the one asterisk was enough, but I'll censor the rest from now on. Sorry 'bout that!//
App looked down, ashamed. She wanted… "I'm sorry… I'd like… I'd like you to help him…" Tears started sliding down her pale cheeks. She gently set Clovis down and slid off the bed onto the floor and curled up, eyes peeking just over her knees.
Molly rubs her side and ignores the kids remark.
Conner turned away and pulled the supplies closer, pressing on his arm until a vein revealed itself. He slid the needle inside gently and taped it down, squeezing the bag slightly to watch the liquid slide down the tube and into his arm. Next, he moved to the wound, feeling on the other side for an exit wound. Finding none, he turned to the others, "I have to get the bullet out," he said, "If the wound is shallow enough, I might just be able to pull it out, but if it's deep I'll have to cut into him,"
(Clovis' arm is like, super bad. It's torn apart.)(Henry like shot a lot of bullets at him and he used his arm as a shield)
App squeaked when he mentioned cutting and restrianed herself from grabbing Clovis again. She just nodded, playing with a loose string from a tear in her pants.
Whelp. Time for a rewrite! All the context I got was 'he got shot' so… XD//
Conner turned away and pulled the supplies closer, pressing on his arm until a vein revealed itself. He slid the needle inside gently and taped it down, squeezing the bag slightly to watch the liquid slide down the tube and into his arm. Next, he moved to the wound, feeling on the other side for an exit wound. Finding none, he turned to the others, "I have to get the bullet out," he said, "If the wound is shallow enough, I might just be able to pull it out, but if it's deep I'll have to cut into him,"
REWRITE:
Conner's eyes wandered over the destroyed arm, moving to the other arm and pressing on it until a vein revealed itself. He slid the needle inside gently and taped it down, squeezing the bag slightly to watch the liquid slide down the tube and into his arm. The boy returned to Clovis' arm, running his fingers over the many woulds, "I have to amputate it," he said quietly, looking at them, "If he keeps it, he'll die," he'd never done an arm amputation before, but he'd done plenty of fingers and toes… how much different could it be?
(Clovis' arm should be okay, like he won't lose it, but it's pretty terrible as of now)
(DON'T TAKE THE ARM UNLESS YOU CAN GIVE HIM A COOL METAL ONE XD)
(Auhg I was in claaasss)
Claire just watched. All my fault….. The thought echoed consistently in her mind. All my fault…..
I wish I could give him a cool metal one XD. Maybe they meet a metalworker later on?
But if he used it as a shield, then medically and realistically speaking it would most definately need to be amputated. There would be no way anything else could be done//
(Najdbkajdvkwk)(BUT MY BOOOOI)(I blame Claire XD)(okiiiieeee…. Go ahead)(he's gonna freak out when he wakes up,)
Okay. Continuing with the amputation XD//
Considering there wasn't really modern medical technology, Conner had to make do with what he had. Making sure the iv was still going, Conner picked up what he needed.
~Time skip because I'm too lazy to explain the process~
Conner finished the last patch of skin, searing it closed. Next, he grabbed the gauze and covered the stump. Stepping back, the boy wiped his forehead. He'd been working nonstop for hours to ensure it was done right, "I'll have to go back in in a few days to make sure there's no infection but he should be fine now." Conner said exhaustedly
(Gah since no one else is on, can I just change my mind?? I still want him to have that arm XD)(lets say it was bad enough to cause a lot of blood loss, but not quite bad enough for an amputation.)(can we please do that?)
(Im here jus in the middle of class XD)
(IM SORRY IM COMPLICATED)
XD ooooooooooooooooooooooooooffffff lol. OKay. So whatever needed to happen, happened to heal him because I'm not doing another rewrite//
OKAY EVERYONE, CLOVIS STILL HAS HIS ARM BUT IT'S BANDAGED AND HURT JUST BE CAREFUL WITH HIM.
(Oookey but Claire is still depressed ;-;)
(Oof I missed a lot and now idk what to have Fiona do..)
(Have her just in the room,…… i dunno…. lets wait for Whisper tho)
I UNDERSTAND
(Thanks guys.)