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Started December 31, 2020 by @SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group

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Lol

I don't really know if I have any favorites of my own characters. I still like all of them but I can't say that I have favorites…

Oh, don't get me wrong, I do love all of mine (and hate some of them at the same time). It's just that these ones are more fully developed.

Fair enough.

So, were there any parts that you particularly enjoyed?

Of the story or of our comments? Because the face you sent when you asked if I had done the math cracked me up. I still chuckle when I think about it. 😉

Seriously though, I did enjoy a lot of this story. On this page alone, I like and respect the fact that you took a personal experience and wrote it from your character's perspective. It made him seem even more real and relatable.

Both I guess. Math is not one of my strong suits.

Honestly, it's not my strongest suit either… I can manage but that's about it.