@song-of-the-fairy
Alright. I have this down to major plot points without all the character developments and foreshadowing so if you have any questions about how certain scenes are being set up, just ask! Anyway, be as brutal as possible. I'm not sensitive, so don't worry about hurting my feelings! (also, a little bit you need to know: the King of the fairies dictates the regions and took out the elves. Witches and elves are the only ones with magic in this world and witches don't really help the humans. Mallory is a witch and Nadine is the only elf to survive the elf massacre thing. Caitlin's motivation is to stop the war and help his father get over his grief in a more healthy way. Eldred, Cori, Lake, and Emmy are fairy generals. Emmy is also Cait's childhood friend.)
~Abilene kills her mother before being put to death (Abilene is Caitlin’s older sister)
~The King burns down the Elf Tree/Village thing
~Discovering of Nadine
~Emmy and Eldred’s accounts of Malory are reported
~Caitlin infiltrating Mallory and Nadine
~A witches’ coven follows Nadine back to camp and Caitlin “sacrifices” herself to save them
~Caitlin tells to give her a few days before taking action
~Caitlin goes with Mallory and Nadine on "side quests" and actually starts to like the humans
~Emmy is sent to capture Dee by the King and she blows Cait’s cover
~Cait protects Nadine
~When Emmy is reporting the incident, Cait tries to clear Emmy’s memory but fails and kills her
~Eldred gives off the impression that he killed her and is immediately sent to his own prison
~Cori takes Emmy’s jobs and Lake takes El’s jobs
~Dee shows up to comfort Cait without even knowing what happened
~Cait tells Mallory and Nadine the truth
~They break El out of prison
~El burns the kingdom before being put to death yet
~The King realizes what he’s done
(at this point the plot is ify in my opinion)
~Cori kills the King and knocks Cait and Lake out
~Cait and Lake are captured by Cori, but Cori offers to free Lake if he kills Cait
~Lake kills Cori and rescues Cait
~Cait reorganizes the kingdom. She hires Mallory and Nadine to be Generals alongside Lake
~Cait’s ambushed by rebels because she’s a fairy