forum SO I started a novel in september 2020 help!

Started October 11, 2021 by @CaseyJ group

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Bc it's dark?

Well yeah, and I don't think my writing style is that great.

Sir. I for one love your writing style. And just because something is dark doesn't mean that it's bad, it's just for a different audience

Thank you. I really appreciate that.

your welcome. If you don't mind my asking, What did you have in mind for the end point for The Night Rider?

Well I was going to have Carter go find his dad. After a lot of backstory stuff.

Ooo fun. was his dad going to have a positive or negative reaction?

Well I was going to have his dad like, disappeared one day and carter didn't know why and then when carter finds him he figures out why. (I haven't decided why yet)

nice. I like where you're going with this.

Like I was thinking carters dad, (Charles) got turned, and ran away bc his family was threatened. Actually I have a backstory chapter planned already.

Oh, when your done with it, can i read it?

Yeah sure.

Yay, thanks

I had to re-read it bc I forgot my writing style ;-;

lmao (* ' *)

I had a whole chunk written…but it didn't save (T^T)/

AHhh I hate it when that happens

Right? I realize I was writing in a sort of funny 1st pov rather than a 3rd.

The 1st person is good, it's just kind of hard to maintain.

I'm not sure if I should do carter having a flashback or do a 3rd person or do it in charlies pov.

Ooo, Maybe try writing it in each one and see which one works the best. Which one is the smoothest.

Yeah that sounds like a plan. I think I will write it on paper this weekend.

I love writing on paper, even tho typing is faster.

yeah its easier for me. idk why