forum Could Somebody Critique my Location Please? Thanks! :)

Started July 16, 2018 by @cheddarface

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I made this a for the series I'm writing, please give feedback, Thanks! :)

Hello! Okay, so I was looking through, and I saw that under 'Laws' It says "No underaged Magic" what ages count as underage? Can a child do magic legally when they turn 16? (Just for example)

Also, under 'Languages' it says "Magic" and I don't really understand what that means?? Maybe explain a little more?

Another thing is the Area. You say it is located in Canada, but where in Canada? Manitoba? Québec?

That's all I could really think of, other than those few things, I think it's good!

Okay yes, so first off thanks for giving me feedback. All of the questions that you have are answered if you were to read the book that I'm writing with the Jade Hollow in it. First off, underaged Magic. So people are only allowed to use certain spells when they reach certain ages. For instance an invisibility spell. You may only use this spell when you reach the age of 17. You would get an explanation like this if you were to read my book.
Second, Magic as a Language. Once again you would understand this if you were to read the book. Magic is a kind of language, it is the language that people speak when they're casting spells or speaking to ancient races. It is the oldest language in the world.
Finally Canada as the area. If you look again you will see that it says "hidden" in Canada. Nobody knows where it is, only that it's in Canada. If you would like to know I can tell you that it's in B.C. Once Again, thanks for the feedback! :)

Okay! Sounds good! No problem!

Wait by jade do mean like the mineral? Like all these massive trees are made of the pale green marble skinned stone?
Because that sounds awesome.
You ought to go find one of the art people on this sight and implore them to draw it out for you because it sounds visually stunning.
Also just out of curiosity how are the trees jade, magic probably, yeah, nice

Yes, I mean the mineral. I thought of it a while ago and I loved the idea. I didn't know that people on this site did art, but I'll find one of them. Yes, the trees are magic, if you look at the description it says that they're "enchanted jade" and they ward of monsters and can be used as currency for mages. Thanks for the positive feedback and suggestions! :)