forum "Utopia" || Closed || PG-13 || Dystopia themes || Kinda dark || OxO but open for reboots possibly ||
Started by @Moriarty
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@Moriarty

Society is perfect.
At least, that's what the Grand Elector Quentin Pryor says. And, at first glance, he seems quite right. There are no homeless. No sick. No disabled. The population is small, but the people live happy, pleasant lives. They work the jobs they want, and the more shameful positions that no one wants are all filled by androids are machines– so no one has to work them anyways. Education is plentiful, and cheap. Diversity is erased, but equality is embraced. Everyone lives in walled cities and eats artificial meat so that no animals have to die (and pets, too, are outlawed; but you can have an android dog or cat if the government okays it)– and the rural areas have been turned back over to the wildlife. Technology has advanced with leaps and bounds.
This is Utopia. This is the year 2130.
But… what if Utopia is not a perfect society? What if living in cities and being separated from nature isn't so good for humanity? What if diversity and equality must go hand in hand? Where are the sick? The homeless? The disabled? What if the measures taken by the government to limit the population are dark and barbaric?
No. Those statements are ridiculous. No one questions Utopia, and anyone who does vanishes. I'm sure they're fine, though. Nothing bad happens to anyone here. Not in Utopia. This is heaven. This is bliss. Everything is good and fair here, so long as you follow the rules. But by all means, make sure you follow the rules.
What are these rules, you might ask? Well, here are a few.

  • No one shall produce offspring without both parents being evaluated and given permission. Each family shall only have one child unless given direct permission to do otherwise.
  • No one shall leave their homes after or before the set curfew.
  • No one shall own weapons.
  • No one shall own unapproved technological devices.
  • Anyone who is ill must visit a doctor if within the daylight curfew hours.
  • Anyone who is terminally sick must be taken to a hospital, whether contagious or not.
  • All children born with disabilities of any kind must be given to the government to receive proper care.
  • No one shall makes sales of any kind without permission of the government.
  • No one shall speak negative of the Grand Elector or the government.
  • No one shall speak negative of another person in public.
  • Homeless must report to a shelter, and the government will provide accommodation.

On top of this, there are the cameras set up in every corner of every city, and the countless other regulations to follow. But these are all for your protection, of course. Breaking any of these rules results in arrest and maybe even incarceration. This, too, is only for your protection.
After all, we can't risk letting anything destroy what we've worked so hard to build.
We can't risk allowing ingrates to tear down our kingdom.

 

But the truth of the matter is that Utopia isn't perfect at all. The population must be kept low in order for everything to operate as it does– in this essentially communist state. That seems all good and well, until one realizes how many died in order for it to get this way. Those homeless people that go to the shelters? Why, they aren't rehabilitated. They're killed. Actually for the entertainment of those who run the government, including Quentin Pryor himself. The sick? Slaughtered like animals. It would cost too much to make them recover, as far as the leaders are concerned, so they might as well be eliminated. The same goes for the disabled. Whether mentally or physically, no one wants to take care of them, and the government isn't interested in having "flawed" citizens, as they say. So they're killed for the sport and entertainment of the leaders as well. Orphans, too.
Of course, the average Joe living in Utopia doesn't know this. They just know they never see anyone struggling, so life must be good. But they don't know what really happens. And those who do know– families of disabled or sick– are usually deceived by a sweet-talking rep who says, "Don't worry; I promise your family member will be happier if you allow us to take them and care for them. They'll have a better life this way." That's a lie, but how would anyone know? And those poor guilt-tripped family gladly waves their parent or child or sibling goodbye, wishing them well, unknowingly sending them to a grave.
Oh, and criminals? They're slaughtered, too. Also for entertainment. And anyone who breaks the "rules" sanctioned by Quentin Pryor is considered a criminal. Of course, sometimes he's lenient. Break one of the smaller ones and you'll get threatened or punished mildly, but you'll never see the true colors until you're already across the line. Criminals that do happened to get released from "prison" are always made examples of. No one knows what happens to them, and they're too afraid to ask, but these poor souls are empty shells of themselves, brainwashed and often scared to even think about breaking a rule ever again.

 

In this RP, you can play more than one character, because I will likely play several. I will play Quentin Pryor, police officers, and government agents as needed. I will also likely play characters that are leaders of a "secret resistance" that the government is trying to obliterate; this resistance is not known to the public. I think it would be easiest for you to being with a single character, but you may use more if you like, and you're always welcome to bring in new ones throughout.
Some ideas for your starting character could be:

  • An average person living a fairly normal life until they find out they have an illness (OR they become homeless and report to a shelter). From here, they realize things aren't quite as fair as they should be.
  • A conspiracy theorist that has been trying to determine the truth in secret for years and gets discovered/ recruited by the resistance.
  • Someone who happens to meet a physically disabled teen (my character) on the run one day who begs them (your character) to help them hide.
  • Etc, etc, etc. We can discuss. Please tell me your ideas.
  RP rules are simple  
  • No cursing or profanity.
  • Violence welcome, but don't be incredibly extreme with the gore.
  • Romance is welcomed, but keep in mind that all my characters are heterosexual.
  • Sex scenes are not allowed. Only PG-13 romance.
  • No auto-hitting or godmodding. Please don't be OP, okay?
  • Feel free to discuss ideas and questions with me, but try to keep my plot in mind and respect the worldbuilding I've done. I'm willing to work things out with you though, and I don't bite.
  • Let me reiterate: NO PROFANITY.
  • Don't let this die on me, please. If you have to be away for a few days, I understand. Try to let me know in advance. I go on random hiatuses, so I won't hold it against you if you get busy, just please inform me.
  • Use decent grammar. You don't have to be an English teacher, and even I have a crap ton of typos, but… punctuation is an important thing to use, alright?
  • I'll post templates once people start showing interest. I'll also tell more about the character(s) I intend to be using.
  • I may be willing to do reboots if you're eager.
  • Please be aware that this might get a little dark. Not dirty, per se, but dark themes will likely be referred to.

@saor_illust school

(What? This has been up for a half hour and no one's interested? I'm interested, for sure! You've piqued my curiousity! May I? I promise I'll try my best to try to have at least daily responses, although I've been a little out of it lately.)

@Moriarty

(What? This has been up for a half hour and no one's interested? I'm interested, for sure! You've piqued my curiousity! May I? I promise I'll try my best to try to have at least daily responses, although I've been a little out of it lately.)

Don't worry! I really only say that because I've been abandoned before in RPs, but as long as you don't abandon me altogether, I'll understand if you're gone for a week straight. ^-^ Never worry about stressing yourself for an RP with me. So– yeah, if you're interested, feel free to join! :3

@Moriarty

HOORAY! ^-^ Alright, so, do you have any questions or suggestions regarding the plot or… anything? :3 Most of my main charries will be males, and they're gonna be generally heterosexual, so if you wanna do romances, maybe use a woman, but I'm a REAL sucker for strong friendships in RPs, so we could go that route, too. And if you wanted to do both, I'd be cool with it, too.

@saor_illust school

Yay! :D
So, a couple things- I'm really bad at writing romance- but I am going to play a female, because I write females best. And I think, because I feel like she would work well for this rp, I'd like to use one of my favorite characters, Elara.

And as for friendships I'm totally down for anything!

@Moriarty

That's totally fine! I do great with or without romance, so I'm cool with that. Now, how would you prefer this to go down? Do any of the suggestions I made above for your character in the starting post appeal to you, or do you have any suggestions of your own? It's 3:44 AM here, so I'll likely go to bed soon, but I'll reply to you until I do and again when I wake up.

@saor_illust school

Oki-
And yeah, actually that first suggestion sparked some ideas- now, usually when I use Elara, she already is aware of her illness- ALS. However, given that it would make more sense that she doesn't know about it initially, I can change a couple of things about her. And alrighty-

@Moriarty

She could be aware of it when it begins, and the "inciting incident" could be that it's more imminent so that it's necessary for her to go to the hospital. Maybe she has a bad feeling about going to the hospital and tries to avoid it, which is illegal, of course, and chaos ensues. Who knows. The possibilities are endless. :3

@Moriarty

(This looks sick! To bad I'm late 😧)

I may be willing to do a reboot with you if you're interested. I don't think we've RPed before.

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(Oh! Ya I've never Rp'd with you. I think. I'm not sure and if you don't want a reboot that's all right!)

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(Yes please then ◇^◇. And don't worry I have…decent grammar.)

@saor_illust school

She could be aware of it when it begins, and the "inciting incident" could be that it's more imminent so that it's necessary for her to go to the hospital. Maybe she has a bad feeling about going to the hospital and tries to avoid it, which is illegal, of course, and chaos ensues. Who knows. The possibilities are endless. :3

Ooo yes, I like where you're thinking!~

@Moriarty

Name: Frederick Linn
Nickname: Freddy
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Occupation/job: N/A; he works with the resistance
Backstory: He was in an accident when he was ten that left him paralyzed waist-down. He should've been taken away by the government, but he was rescued by Atlas.
Personality: Extroverted || Sarcastic || Snarky || Odd sense of humor || Bitter towards the government || Holds a grudge || Has a good heart but doesn't like to be considered "soft" || Hates being pitied || Mild anger issues || Likes dogs || Skeptical ||
Strengths: He's an expert hacker and knows everything the government is up to.
Weaknesses: He's confined to a wheelchair and has trust-issues
Appearance: He'd be about 5'8" if he could stand upright, but he can't, and he's confined to the wheelchair. He has fair skin, curly black hair, dark brown eyes, and a skinny build.
Outfit: Glasses || Dark hoodies and sweatpants || Converse shoes || Colorful, mismatched socks || He likes to put random pins on his shirt ||
Family: N/A; died in car crash or unknown locations
Views on the government: Well he loathes them
Other:

Name: Atlas Kilian
Nickname: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Occupation/job: N/A; he works with the resistance
Backstory: Unknown currently. He rescued Freddy six years ago, shortly after joining the resistance. He currently takes care of Freddy and treats him like a little brother.
Personality: Leader-personality || Strategic || Kind and charismatic if you're on his good side || Dangerous if you're on his bad side || Hates being controlled || Protective of his friends || Determined and ambitious || Altruistic || Friendly ||
Strengths: Skilled in weaponry, hand-to-hand combat, and long-range shooting.
Weaknesses: He can sometimes be too idealistic.
Appearance: 6'2" || Strong build || Olive skin || Hazel eyes || Jet-black hair || Short stubble lining his jaw || Sharp jawline ||
Outfit: Combat clothes || Black shirt || Beige cargo pants || Combat boots || Plain jacket ||
Family: N/A
Views on the government: Clearly he hates them too
Other: Neither Atlas nor Freddy are currently living in the city in a known location.

 

And here's the template for you. ^-^

Name:
Nickname:
Gender:
Age:
Occupation/job:
Backstory:
Personality:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Appearance:
Outfit:
Family:
Views on the government:
Other:

@Moriarty

No worries! Take all the time you need. I'm in no hurry. You fill out as many details as you want. The more details, the better! ^-^

@saor_illust school

{sdaflkj;fsdkldsfkl i'm so sorry this took so long! but here's my girl!}

Name: Elara Jupiter

Nickname: none

Gender: female

Age: 17 (i generally have her at 17, but if you want me to age her up or down that's totally fine too)

Occupation/job: student, looking into a part-time job

Backstory: A year ago, the symptoms set in. Thanks to a friend of a friend of hers, she was able to look up the symptoms and find a diagnosis on the web without the government knowing, but ever since then she's been terrified of the government finding out and her having to leave her family and friends. Although, as the months have flown by, it has been getting harder and harder to hide the symptoms.

Personality: Despite her medical issues, Elara always tries to stay positive, even when things are tough. She has a tendency to make dark jokes when she's scared, and loves to draw. She really hates spiders and snakes, and especially worms, for some reason. But she really likes to read, surf Twitter, and search the internet for yet more art supplies that she doesn't need lmao.

Strengths: can draw really well, is constantly trying to look at the positive side of things

Weaknesses: well, obviously the ALS symptoms, her fear/hatred of spiders, snakes, and worms, and any mention of her impending death

Appearance: (ref image from pinterest) Chest-length blonde, slightly wavy hair. Blue-grey eyes, small nose, thin lips. bright skin. Not very tall, only about 5 feet. Her face has a quality about it that makes her appear as if she is younger than she really is. She has a slightly high-pitched voice, but not very high. However, this difference is amplified when recorded. Hourglass body shape.

Outfit: A more casual look // professional-ish look (aka just a nicer look)

Family: (oh hecc um… i kinda forgot about family since that usually never comes up. ill just say a normal family consisting of mom and dad?)

Views on the government: Neither likes nor dislikes them. Neutral. She's okay with most of the rules, except for the one she has been breaking for a whole year; she doesn't want to leave her family and friends, even if she does think she might come back.

Other: