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My name is Violet Cummings, and I can see dead people.

OK so I have an idea. I'm gonna turn this into a story, so I want to use this to develop the character I'm going to use for it.
To give a quick plot point, she has to help the soul of the most popular guy in school. He died in a car crash, and he needs her help. She slowly starts to fall for him, or rather, his soul.

I had this before, but it never really took off. It's not a reboot, since it barely started. I just want to develop my character, that's all.

This isn't really what the story is going to be, but it's the simplest thing to develop her.
I'll post a template if someone wants to join.

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(I would love you to - but are you going to be on often enough?
I really want to develop violet and I can't do that if you don't respond
That's what happened to the other one, they never replied once)

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(Sorry about that, I was really stressed and I wanted to take a break, but forgot to tell everyone. Also, yes, I'm on the whole day now since I'm on summer break)

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(OK good
It's just that the other person (who I tried to make this with) didn't understand my version of souls and didn't reply with one reply
So I made a new one)

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Name:
Age: (17-18)
Gender:
Sexuality:
Appearance: (detailed, no links unless described (so basically violet sees dead people, but they're not ghosts. to her, they're basically normal people, except no one else can see, hear or touch them like she can. she can see what you looked like the exact moment you died. if you had cleaned or stitched cuts, that's how they appear, that kind of thing. also she can tell if you're dead, because she can see how you died. she can see if you got shot or an arrow through your skull, cause that's how you appear. if you had a heart attack or a stroke she can't tell cause it's internal. if you were in a car crash or something, she might be able to tell if you have cuts stuff. also they can't pass through walls or fly, so…))
Style: (day-to-day clothing (whatever he was wearing when he died, probably bloody)
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Background:
Power/s: (not applicable to you, i need it for violet and the character who will replace yours in the story (again, this is only to develop violet))
Other:

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Name: Violet Cummings
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Appearance: Violet has short purple hair. It is half-shaved and about 10cm in total length. If her hair was to be compared to be a specific colour, it would be byzantium. Her eyes are a simple brown, but may appear amber or red in certain lights. Her skin is pale, but has a soft tan to it.
Style: Anything comfortable, typically seen with heeled boots and a beanie.
Personality: Reserved, sassy, sarcastic, determined, sticks to herself
Likes: Reading, movies, drawing, her family
Dislikes: Being able to see ghosts, her sister being dead
Background: In Violet’s family, the first-born girl receives the gift to see the souls of people who passed. So it was a surprise to the whole family when Violet showed the gift, as her older sister Rebecca already had it. However, it could have been seen as a warning. Shortly after it was discovered of Violet having the gift, Rebecca passed away. It seemed that she had no unfinished business, as her soul never arrived to pass on. And Violet was left as an only child, wishing that she could have seen her sister one more time. She wears a lotus locket.
Everyone at school knows that she can see dead people. They regard her as weird, and she’d frankly like to keep it that way. She dislikes people, and it’s annoying enough when she has to interact with the souls.
Power/s: She can see dead people as they were when they died. They are just like any normal person to her: she can see, hear and touch them. Other people cannot see, hear or touch them, try as they might. She takes this ability both as a gift and a curse.
She also has the ability to heal the spirits and make them whole again (like not dead), but this ability seems to have a mind of its own, as she can rarely use it.
Other:

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(I'm on my phone at the moment, so I'll get my character up first thing tomorrow, sorry)

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(Actually
Nevermind, I thought I wouldn't be able to get on my laptop again today, but I was able to so I'll get my character up now
Also, you're welcome!)

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(oh OK cool
Take your time
The way you worded it at the start I thought you were gonna drop out and I was like fuck)

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(Lol, I'm not going to drop out
Trust me
If you don't want to it's fine)

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(No no I really want to do it because she's a baby but I thought you were cause of your wording ('Actually Nevermind'))

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(I tend to say that a lot, sorry. I'm almost done with Aaron by the way)

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Name: Aaron Henderson
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Bisexual, hit him up guys and ladies :)) (But he does have just a bit of a preference for guys)
Appearance:
Height: 5'10
Eye Color: His actual eye color is a dark brown but he usually wears blue contacts, that doesn't mean he doesn't wear different colored contacts though. He has worn green contacts but he only wears colors that look good on him, which usually consists of different shades of blue. Also, he wears contacts to school sometimes for no reason in particular. (By the way, he looks hella innocent with brown eyes but he is a god when he was contacts)
Hair Color: Original color is black, but he dyes it a lot, yet it isn't damaged and is still pretty. The color he has now is his original hair color, black.
General Features: Since his mother South Korean and his dad is American, he got his mother's looks and his father's personality. He also has eight ear piercings, three lower piercings on both ears and two Helix piercings in his right ear. But he usually only wears an earring in one of the lower piercings
Aaron with blue contacts in, Aaron without blue contacts

He also has a giant bruise across his chest, that looks like the imprint of a seat belt, along with several other bruises and cuts all over him from the car crash. Adding on, he wasn't wearing his contacts and he had small black earrings in all of his piercings.
Style: On the day he died, he had been wearing a letterman jacket with 'Henderson' on the back. Underneath that, he had been wearing a plain white t-shirt (which is now bloody), along with black ripped jeans and black converse. But now, they're all ripped up and bloodied up from the crash, and there were a few pieces of glass that had went into his pockets that he doesn't know about
Personality: Even though he's the most popular guy in school, he's still shy and won't initiate a conversation or speak his opinions first unless it's about a topic he is really interested in. He also does the most random things at the most random times, like doing a weird dance during dinner to make everyone laugh where he would also end up on the floor laughing. Also, he can be a bit too hardworking and will practice until he faints. He has done it before and will probably do it again. He can also be really straightforward, if he wants something, he will put all his efforts and energy into it.
Likes: Listening to music, reading, drawing, singing, nature, exercising
Dislikes: Crowds, strangers, stalkers, running on a treadmill, aerobics, swimming
Background: Aaron's parents had met when his father went to South Korea for a project in high-school, exchanging numbers and trying to teach his mother English while his mother taught his father Korean. His father helped his mother get to America and they got married, raising Aaron in a small and quiet village. His life had been pretty normal until Aaron woke up and found his father in a pool of blood, a bullet in his head and heart along with stab wounds all over his body. Aaron was absolutely devastated, the poor boy was only 10 and he didn't know any better, making him think his father was just acting. But the truth hit him hard when his mother walked into the room and started bawling her eyes out when she saw him, shaking his father's lifeless body as if trying to wake him up. He had been diagnosed with social anxiety around 13, which made his life harder because he had been his mother's translator, considering she didn't learn English fully yet and Aaron had grown up speaking English and Korean fluently. He often had to translate all the neighbor's gossip about how successful their sons were and about how Aaron was just a spoiled brat. This made him want to become the best at everything, which made him popular in high-school.
Other: I'm bad at making characters

(Is he okay?)

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(can you please put at least a little something in his background?
Otherwise he's fine)

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(I saw your reply and it had been 35 mins and you still hadn't changed it
I was just joking when I looked up how many seconds it had been)

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Violet walked through the halls of West Marina High. She'd gotten used to the whispers. She'd gotten used to the stares. It was just a day in the life of Violet Cummings. 
As she walked towards her locker, she was unaware of someone trailing behind her. Just as she was unaware that no one else could see them.

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Aaron followed Violet around the school, much like a lost puppy following someone that looked remotely close to it's owner. He was quiet for the most part, wincing every so often when something brushed against one of his many bruises. Jesus Christ, they still hurt so much. How is this possible? I'm dead. After a few moments of following her around, he coughed loudly to try and get her attention, making him go into a coughing fit on accident.

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Violet figured that the coughing was Max Anderson somewhere in the school. After all, that kid was always having coughing fits.
She walked towards her locker, ready to get her books for the first few classes. She avoided people where she could: she already had enough stress with souls popping up all over the place.