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Started April 23, 2019 by Deleted user

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Person, all the slots are taken, I am sorry to inform you…

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помочь с англоязычным

Я живу в россии не говорю на хорошем английском

помочь с англоязычным

relatable

(i'm just going to stArt because we all seem a little hesitant)
Outside the shady-looking building, Wolf's eyes darted back and forth between the two big men. "Listen up, gentlemen, I'm not looking for any trouble." He said, cautiously. "If you weren't looking for trouble, then you wouldn't have come here." One of the men said, in a deep voice. The other just nodded and cracked his knuckles.

Aza (lord she likes to stand on roofs) perched on the roof, waiting and watching the black-haired boy below her. He seemed to be in a jam of sorts, but Aza decided to sit it out. For now, she'd only observe.

The two men slowly advanced on Wolf, looming over his short form menacingly.

Wolf felt a tug beneath the ground, and heard the whispers. As the men advanced, he pulled on the tug with all his strength. A crack was heard and the pavement they were standing on opened. A tendril shot out of the gap, and several branches shot out of the main body of the plant. They latched onto the men and pressed them against the building's wall. "Well, it was a pleasure to meet you, gentlemen." Wolf said, mockingly. He did a little bow, and then hopped up, onto the building's roof.

"Hello," Aza chirped. "Wolf, isn't it?"

"Uh hey. Yeah, I'm Wolf. You must be beautiful, nice to meet you." Wolf replied. (Poor attempt at flirt, apologies ;-;)

Aza let out something between a snort and a sigh. "Yes, Azalane is very similar to beautiful, isn't it?"

out of context super quick. What we can do, just a suggestion is switch perspectives of characters

It would be easier to let everyone have an equal chance to write, and would happen at decent stopping points in it

[Right now, the story is focusing on Aza and wolf, later it can focus on somebody else, like Sarose or Cylan]

Aza let out something between a snort and a sigh. "Yes, Azalane is very similar to beautiful, isn't it?"

"Oh, I definitely agree." Wolf replied. "So what's a lady like you doing in these neck of the woods?" He asked her, subtly looking around to make sure they weren't being followed.

"Looking for new specimens," she said and cocked her head, a sadistic glint breaking the surface of her icy eyes.

"Specimen… are you a scientist or a doctor?" Wolf said, seeing the glint in her eyes.

"Amateur scientist," Aza replied. "Trying to cure the…" she trailed off and made the crazy motion.