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Started by @Oakiin
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@Anemone eco

Rules
Only two, please follow them :)

  • Follow the instructions above
  • And rate how likely it would be that you'd read the book of the person above you/call out any places they didn't follow the script of the form.

Follow the rules, dude

@Shadow_Knight group

Title: Defect
Plot: To stop a war two royals of country’s that were once whole, get in a arranged marriage. This doesn’t work
Twists & Character Arcs: The queen isn't who you think she is quité literally. Anastasia kicks someone’s ass, and hides a sword under her dress. Alexa gets rid of her hatred. Zey let’s himself be known. Dan learns to go with failure. Thomas let’s it happen, and enjoys it while he can. Also a royal is a half sibling of a supporting character.

3/5
A good name and plot! The way you put together the Twists & Character Arcs section is confusing though. We don't know any of the characters that you mention so the information is confusing. Who is Anastasia? Who is Dan? We dot know who these people are and how they relate to the plot.

@HighPockets group

@ThoroughlyAccursedCreator
I’ll give you a 4/5
Since it only mentions to sisters I want to know where the others are from

Well given the word limit I really couldn't do that.

@Shadow_Knight group

Title: The Fall
Plot: When an Angel falls from heaven, a head demon decides to help her understand Hell, for a price.
Twists & Character Arcs: When the Angel starts to take up most of the head Demons time, the demons most trusted servant, an Imp, starts to threaten the Angel because they have feelings for the Demon. The Demon has feelings for both the Angel and the Imp, though. (I'm aware this is a little cliche.)