forum Need help with a title
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Okay, so I've plotted out an idea for a story (Tangled the Series fanfic, if you're wondering), but I can't figure out what I want my title to be.

Plot: A 14-year-old who has committed treason/ attempted regicide/ miscellaneous crimes has been sentenced to a little over 5 years of service to the kingdom. The queen has placed herself in charge of overseeing his rehabilitation, despite the fact that he had kidnapped her and tried to kill her (in a fit of grief-induced rage).

The thing is, there are these unbreakable black rocks that have been popping up all over the kingdom that nobody can get rid of, and since the boy is a genius-level alchemist, the queen has decided that a portion of his sentence will be dedicated to discovering how to get rid of these rocks.

This is primarily a redemption arc for the boy. The only title I've got so far is "Behind Bars", but that's really lame. Does anyone here have any ideas for a good title?