So I was thinking of renaming my mystery to 'Seven For The Secrets He Never Told', referencing the old magpie rhyme. I figured the new one outlines the themes of secrets, lies and deceit among peers, but now I'm worried it's too long…. The previous title was 'They found him in The Lake', should I stick with that?
I don't think it's too wordy of a title, though it is a bit risky. I feel like it adds an enticing element verses the other option.
@"Lotus Flower" Thank you so much for the input! ^^
Nah I don't think so
No, but i think it's a bit better than the other. It seems more mysterious and I know personally I would want to read something titled 'Seven For The Secrets He Never Told' than something titled 'They Found Him in the Lake'.
I like the new title better :) (and trust me, my title is much longer, so you don't have to worry about being too wordy, at least in comparison to me XD)