forum Is my chapter out line intesting and flow well?
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Choosing guard for princess

Princess get baptised for her to be reveal as a demon

Cass freaks out and true to run but the guards catch her

The princess is now in the religion of Satan

Practices religion

The princess is sad because she really wanted to follow Jesus and Cass comforts her

Cass confronts the queen and she tells the story

Cass is on board with Satanism

Meets a girl who does not like it but is a demon

Trys to learn more about the religion from said girl

Is still on Satan's side and trys to pressure becca that it's good

becca is in love with Cass and they kids

Cass realised she want to make becca happy

True to talk to the queen to let her practice her religion

Meets up with a girl to practice Jesus

The queen finds out and separated the girls

They meet under a tree and becca runs so she can be free

Cassandra is fired from her job and is about to be executed but before that she goes to her mother's house and finds something so that she knows that Becca is safe

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With the right writing style this could be a really good story.
I’m assuming there are a lot of smaller events that didn’t get put into this list. I love the theme of self exploration, I’d recommend that being your central theme.