forum I'm having trouble finding a title
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@RedTheLoveless

Aight so, I like to use my dreams as inspiration for my writing. Anyways, I'm having trouble finding a title that fits this piece of writing. I have several in mind, but sometimes it's nice to get some feedback. I won't be going too much into detail because I like keeping my public stuff vague.

The possible titles I've had in mind (and the reasonings) were:

  • "Unseen Judgement" - because the creatures hide in the shadows, unseen, and wait to attack when it's too late
  • "Point of Death" - because well one that's a play on the phrase Point of View and I switch that around between the different members of the crew, and several of those members have near-death experiences, and it could attribute to the deadly epidemic that led to this whole mess in the first place
  • "Eden Dying" - because a once safe, beautiful, abundant place becomes rotten and corrupted when people begin to dabble in things they really shouldn't have
  • "Two's Company" - because it's a reference to one of the crew member's names and his backstory
  • "Frost and Ice" - albeit, this is the weakest one unless I tweak some plot points, but essentially this is because of the cold facility and the vault containing cryogenically-stored beings
  • "Son of the Devil" - because it's another reference to one of the crew member's and his past
  • "Cyclone Station" - because this is literally describing the main place where things go down
  • "Last Judgement" - because I want the ending to be hinted at, yet still suck for the readers once they reach that part

@Anemone eco

In my personal opinion, the rest weren't as appealing or attractive to me. The title "Two's Company" makes me think of the whole "one's lonely, two's company, three's a crowd" thing. Thinking of that saying(for lack of better term) makes me ask "why did the author choose to reference that?" Therefore causing me to be more likely to read it. That and it's a backstory? I love reading those.