forum Help with editing

Started April 23, 2019 by @Knight-Shives group

tune

Hey I need help with editing please. The genre of the story is kinda a dark romance with mystery kinda tied in to it.

I could totally help!!

Awesome

What do you need help with

Editing this

It is only a copy because I copied the existing doc i have going

Thanks. I'll try to get back to you tomorrow.

Ok

Here are my nitpicks:
You could let the story slow down a bit
Why did she kill the cop?
What is her motivation to kill everyone she gets serious with
Other than that, it's pretty good. The wording is great, just spend more time on individual scenes.

So two of those questions haven't been answered yet but they will after the next few chapters

and thanks

Welcome