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Anything goes. Stuff you’ve added, removed, or are considering. Major stuff, minor stuff, and in between, this is the place for you to share what changes you’ve made in your world.
Anything goes. Stuff you’ve added, removed, or are considering. Major stuff, minor stuff, and in between, this is the place for you to share what changes you’ve made in your world.
Well, this one is mostly as a reference to a show I just watched.
I changed the air to be about .008 opium
End of Time
I started a rough design of the Azarkil, an ancient race that went extinct a few billion years prior to the main story. I also started to work on their Gods and lore.
I added in some new terms - Ancient World, and New World. New World refers to ‘now’ as in what is currently happening. It would have started only around 2 billion years ago, which is subject to change as well. Ancient World refers to the time of the Azarkil, and when they were around as well as more ancient civilizations.
Started a rough draft on how the Azarkil were able to go to different planets in the Ancient World. I can’t share anything right now, but I will later if I get the chance.
Domination
I started working on the environment of the main planet. Just like, what’s the weather, the terrain, water sources, weather and climate, etc etc. I also began to work with some of the rough drafts of some of the characters.
Domination (Alternative Universe)
I started working on the city. This kind of ties into the main universe as well, but since the AU is on Earth, it’s more touched up upon here.
Sudden Action
I began the origin of how the first humans received superpowers. I also started working on how they’d react to it.
I added in the Ekees to End of Time, a jellyfish like race that pilots mechs to be at an equal with the majority land walking aliens. They’re very intelligent.
My biggest change was having my antagonist live in a different town than the protagonists so it doesn't all seem too forced and coincidental. Oh, also I changed two people from being romantic interests to being twins. It's weird to explain.
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