forum The Titles of my Stories

Started October 16, 2018 by @AJMaskell

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So just judging off of the titles of the main books in my series, would they entice you to read them?

• Little Bird's Book of Lies
• The Innocents
• Wyntergrace
• Fog and Frost
• Hidden in Plain Sight
• The Girl With No Name

The first for sure catch's my attention. It might have something to do with the alliteration, but the title also promises something interesting and unique. I makes me curious. The other titles are fair bit more generic in my opinion. I feel like Wyntergrace would do better with a subtitle or something to give it more context. The Innocents, Fog and Frost, and The Girl With No Name aren't that interesting sounding tbh. I feel like Hidden in Plain Sight would be more curiosity inducing if it was just In Plain Sight. It stands out more when it's not something you'd expect. Hidden in plain sight is something you hear a lot.

I'm not sure if this was at all helpful, it's really just my personal opinion so take it with a grain a salt.

The Girl With No Name caught my eye. It almost sounds like a horror book. The first one, Little Bird’s Book of Lies, also is very interesting.

Thank you for your feedback, It's nice to see what people think about my titles. They're always one of the first parts of my writing process so sometimes they don't end up quite right.