forum Critique My Werewolf Story?

Started May 17, 2018 by @GoblinKing

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Uhhh, here's the universe, feel free to look at the characters if possible? - Invalid Universe

This was interesting :) I looked at the characters as well, its nice how you gave them individual traits, and likes and dislikes (As always I love those little things that make a character unique) Alas I cannot give any more critique for I do not know what to write, but keep it up :)

This was interesting :) I looked at the characters as well, its nice how you gave them individual traits, and likes and dislikes (As always I love those little things that make a character unique) Alas I cannot give any more critique for I do not know what to write, but keep it up :)

Thank you! I'm actually really proud of my characters, so I'm glad you liked them!

No problem :D I`m not really good with characters especially when I need to write them in the story, but creating them is really fun since you get to explore concepts. My favourite characters to create would have to be dark elves, elves or mages in general-My dark elves usually have a twist, like I don't know, their race. Some of them are mixed with good elves so their traits become mixed. If they mixed with a good elf, it becomes a bit hectic, because the dark elf would be considered an aberration since it has the good characteristics of the normal light/half-elf, etc