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Um, can i ask, why did you like mine? It was cliche and had tons of unneeded emotion.
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I just liked the feel of it and even though it was cliche, it reminded me of a book I love. Also I just liked the writing style the best. But I will say that all the dialogue sounded the same.
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Well, thanks for the compliments and critiques. I'll try my best to expand my dialogue vocabulary. I'm glad you liked my writing, i guess. ^_^'