forum What's your favorite plot twist you've ever written?
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@thatonegirl1958

For me, I have sO many plot twists in the story I'm working on. But the most influential and game-changing one is when my protag, Ezra, realizes that his whole life, he has been raised to believe he is a warlock of an ice element, when really, he's an eternal who has the element of fire. The revelation is shocking for him, but once he gets the hang of how much power he truly possesses, AH it's so great!!

@cami

uh, when nova, THE PROTAGONIST, dies halfway through the novel. i mean that was a shock to me. i love plot twists, so my novels are riddled with them.

@joufflucharlie

I'd say the only real plot twist in my story is when I separate my two main characters right before the climax is supposed to happen. One gets taken and held prisoner by the main villain while the other has to forge onward alone. I think it overall made the story more interesting and led to some of the emotional high points of the novel!

@ThatGirl

On of the plot twists i wrote in a short story was the main charecter started the hero but by the end you could see they where the villan. Every villan is a hero in there own mind

@p3ncil

Ok, so theres this assassin dude at the very beginning of my story and he shows up and kills a bunch of people and that starts the main character on her quest. Then a WHILE later, she ends up meeting this one guy who's like, "Oh, you're orphaned? Well I'm sure my family would accept you" and, you guessed it, his dad is Mr. Assassin. He's a pretty chill hufflepuff who loves his children.

@X_BOTBL_Creator_X

Probably the biggest Plot Twist Ive ever written was one of my most innocent characters having a bad side. That sounds like a classic "Oh look. Good person turns bad, blah blah blah." Nope! It was a huge turn of events and actually effected lots of people, including her crush.

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Biggest twist I've ever written is probably in the first book I ever wrote, where it's revealed that the main character's best friend was only using them to get what they wanted. I made the friend really lovable and awkward too, to make sure you didn't suspect them.

@starjack

Best plot twist? Definitely when it was revealed that the protagonist was

  • lost an in alternate dimension
  • pregnant
  • lost her child in an accident
  • had cancer
  • was intentionally infected with said cancer

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I turned my protagonist to a girl. I mean, she always was a girl, but she looked like a boy and show herself as one, because she had to hide her identity. It was quiet funny because one of the other Charakters slowly felt in love with her when she appeared as a boy.

@andrew health_and_safety flash_onAdmin

I wrote a 200-page novel once just so I could build up into a super-tense moment (some terrorists shooting up an elementary school)… and then transition mid-sentence into the Fresh Prince of Bel-Air lyrics with several blank pages after.

Not sure if that counts though. :)

@Astrid

Quick summary: When my character found out that her boyfriend was her brother and he knew all along. She stabbed him.
(don't judge me xD)

@Astrid

On of the plot twists i wrote in a short story was the main charecter started the hero but by the end you could see they where the villan. Every villan is a hero in there own mind

–Nice villian/hero quote. Tumblr??

sophie

i love emotional plot twists, like, so much. my current favorite is having the most cautious, skeptical, borderline-cowardly character force himself to lose everything for the greater good. He has to physically tear his daughter away from him and place all his faith in there being something //better// out there (not metaphorically, literally) while assuming he'll never see her again if he does. It's shitty and awful and i love it.

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Maybe when it's discovered that the mother of my main character isn't actually her mother and also she's the main villain. You don't suspect her at all because you only see her like once at the very beginning of the novel and she's super nice and then BAM she shows up at the end being all evil and whatnot. Now that I think about it it's all terribly cliche…

@PeaceWillWin-FearWillLose

It is revealed that the main character's best friend and mentor is actually the main antagonist, and has been for most of the story (it's complicated, and involves a demon possession).

@Astrid

Another plot twist was when my protagonist realized that who she worked for—who she represented and stood for—was not what she thought, but by then it was too late. She dies saving her friend.
(Question, should she come back in book 2?)

Marionette87

I think my favorite is from a fanfiction. The first line of the story is, "God, I feel like I've been hit with a train." The last lines are, "Wh-What happened? Where am I? Is this a hospital?" "Miss, please, calm down. You've been in a coma for the past three weeks." "How? What happened?" She looks at me, shocked. "You don't remember?" she asks, gently resting her hand on my own. Our eyes lock and she sighs. "Miss, you tried to kill yourself by jumping in front of a train."

shootingstar5678

i think the biggest plot twist i've ever made, was a situtation in a group of friends where everybody thought that one of them was an a-hole, but in the end she turned out to have been possessed time to time by a demon. it does'nt sound all that exciting now, but a lot of my friends reactions when reading it was just complete shock.