I am writing a new book and this is only the prologue but PLEASE DON'T HOLD BACK! Write as much CONSTRUCTIVE criticism as you want! (Please write the criticism in the comments here, since you only have viewing access on the document!)
Link- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pt7lzjaJ28hPLmrn3MxMAmAS6V0LQlFFwd0VDqgzhmw/edit?usp=sharing
I think it's amazing thus far, but I'd maybe make it a little more clear on what time period this is taking place in, I'm slightly confused. And is the place Earth or a place similar to Earth? Other than that, this is wonderful and I'm highly intrigued and want to read more! Keep up the good work!
*re-sew. I feel as if the plot progresses too fast, and we never get a true glimpse of her background.