forum Dying! At the dinner table. BAND MEMBERS ONLY!

Started May 20, 2018 by Deleted user

tune

I can rap like hell btw

Ok then sly you do the rap because I rap like your grandmother.

I push my chair away
Don't let my mind stray away
Anyway
I don't think anyone understands
I cannot bear those little green strands

(idk…)

Ok can we not make this like asparagus because well no.

YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!

wait why not?

Because I don't want to make the entire song about asparagus like there are other foods too.

ALRIGHTY THEN

I search the cabinets once more
What was it that I was lookin for?

My eyes wander to the top
I suddenly stop
Is that an Ice pop?

I don't think all three of those lines should rhyme.

I was just trying to jazz it up a bit

Well I think its ok.

If you think its okay then okay

I don't know, I'm not really the expert so might as well give some advice.

lol no one here is an expert

Well, I guess it just depends.

How about and this is just an idea

we write the whole song before editing it or critiquing?

I'm definitely not an expert, but I've been writing for years now. It may be a small thing but it sounds a little off to me. But that's only my opinion.

Yeah that makes sense, I'm just not used to working like that. Sorry.

guys we should add some iconic chinese food in there

Might as well do that.

yay

YEAH WE SHOULD AND SOME VIETNAMESE TOO AND WELL SOME ASIAN AND DABS OF EUROPEAN AND HISPANIC.

I slam the door and shout in grief
My mind crowds with disbelief
Time to make a hasty decision
This was not how I envisioned

^Omg can that be part of the rap?

yas

YASSSSS