forum Another one of Shuri's terrible characters in RP format...
Started by @Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo
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@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

Here's a new one I made on a whim, I think the next one is gonna be a girl…

Name: Dante Elafry
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Pansexual
Age: 19
Species: Freak
Background: Lives on the streets. Never quite fit in with humans. Eventually adopted by a good family and started to feel at home, but was rejected when they found out he isn't human. Wanders now.
Personality: He has a very big attitude, and is a very troubled, rude person. Often he is a foodie, foul mouthed, and vulgar. Other than that he's way too reckless, and often impulsive. However, he is also quite tender, and hilarious, not to mention he is actually very sensible despite his immaturity.
Appearance: He is very small, being short and thin, with a dusting of freckles on his nose. All of the hair on his body is blue, as are his eyes, and he is usually always seen with a big grin. He is slightly androgynous, and appears to be younger.
Talents: Comes up eith great insults and comebacks. A good scavenger and thief if he needs to be one. Excellent memory.
Flaws: Csuses a lot of collateral damage, has bigtime depression and anxiety.
Powers: Superhuman strength, stamina, agility, speed, durability and healing factor. Radical/responsive evolution, various other features such as corrosive saliva, extendable/retractable spurs, and heat-sensing.
Other: Those who know him call him Stitch or 626 because like the Disney character, he's smsll, blue-haired, and causes a lot of collateral damage. (No he's not an homage or an OC based on Stitch, but I did recognize the similarities.) Has a very slight Egyptian accent from his time there…

Can I get criticism? Or honest thoughts? I didn't want to use the Notebook.ai sheet (fabulous as it is) because this is just a whim… So…

@Hey_Its_Snowy_And_Im_Generally_Confused

Sorry I’m not good at this but…
The species sounds v interesting, maybe you could elaborate? Obviously the details in his appearance and powers are helpful, but I’m still not sure as to what he is. Awesome name, by the way! Also, I know you just made the character but it’d be helpful developing (most specificslly “wanders now”) the pretty great personality and backstory he already has, and why was he in Egypt? I see has a lot of powers, personally I’d try not to make him OP but I’m sure you’ll do a good job of that. Overall he’s great!