forum Crystalline Pirates: Protectors of the Island (Closed! You can stalk though.)
Started by @ShadeStar
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@ShadeStar

(Lol but you are here now! So shall we start? We can either be leaving the island or out in the middle of the sea, your choice.)

@ShadeStar

(Okay.)

Cicada was shouting out orders to the crew. They had to be off the island soon before the barrier returned and rough seas came, "Faster! Get those crystals and get them aboard. Stop lazing around and do something!"

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Houston: AY! WHERE'S THE FIFTH POWDER BAG? I'VE LOADED ALL THE CANNONS EXCEPT THE FIFTH! WHO'S GOT IT?

@ShadeStar

(Rumple just one suggestion. This isn't going to be dialouge based, so uh. Maybe write out your characters actions and then use quotations for dialogue?)

Deleted user

(Was just about to fix it, actually.)
Houston sat grumpily on the last canon as no one answered him. "Hey! Don't forget the measurements for my eye! I'll need to make a new one in 'bouta week. I'll get the paper, Cicada, you get that crystal!"

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(Guys, I will get right back to you after I stop my panicking.)

Deleted user

"Yeah, and I shoot your cannons to keep you alive!"
Nevertheless, he crumpled the paper in his own pocket and ran down the gangplank to fetch his crystals.

@ShadeStar

Cicada rolled her eyes and muttered, "Other people could do that too. But go nooooo, you have to be the powder monkey. I swear I don't understand people sometimes."

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"I could just as well be the captain! Don't make us do all the work! Do you want yer crystals? Then come get 'em!" He shouted back up in annoyance, loading up a barrel of his crystals and ignoring Cicada's still lying on the ground.

Deleted user

"Hey Brooke! I advocate you as the new captain, to show Cicada we could all do her job just as well!" He shouted, dumping the barrel at Brooke's feet quite by accident.
"Oops."

@ShadeStar

Cicada let out a long heavy sigh. Houston was still new, she reminded herself as she went to go check the riggings. One mistake and the ship wouldn't make it out of the port. Besides she had her crystals on her, those were spares, idiots.

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Houston backed away slowly, picking up his crystals as he went. "Geez, sorry. Why is everyone here so bossy? And, no one ever answered my question. WHO HAS THE LAST POWDER BAG?"