forum My Hero Academia?//CLOSED (5/5)
tune

people_alt 3 followers

@LeafyLemur

Gah! I finally was able to get my bios! Here they are!//

Name: Konno Haniko

Alias: Moyasu (Literal Translation: Burn) (Note: The League of Villains know her by this name, they are unaware of her real name somewhat like Dabi)

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Bisexual

Blood Type: B-

Appearance: Very short dark blue hair (you can see the black roots, but they kinda blend into the blue), orange eyes, 5’9, oval face shape, long neck, thicker eyebrows, small nose, rectangle body (thin and long), usually has a serious expression, normally wears light grey yoga pants, a grey shirt, and grey tennis shoes. Her villain outfit is a mask over the bottom half of her face (so she isn’t recognized by her twin), a thin dark grey hoodie (doesn’t usually wear the hood), black gloves, black yoga pants, and her light grey tennis shoes

Personality: Konno is calm, level headed, and analytical. She has a dry sense of humor. Konno is pretty intelligent and seems serious, but has a more relaxed and sweet side to her, though it’s almost gone now from living on her own and being with the League of Villains. She believes a hero shouldn’t be doing it for the money, thus joining the League of Villains. Konno likes to work alone, but will cooperate with the League of Villains.

Quirk: Elemental Manipulation- When she’s surrounded by an element, she can manipulate it to a certain extent. If used for too long, she will be out of breath, thirsty, unable to stand upright, and/or will feel burning hot. It can lead to fatal consequences if used too much.

Backstory: When Konno was younger, she had a dream like almost every other young boy and girl, to be a hero. As she grew; however, her view on heroes started to change. She began to see a different side to them, a greedy side. Konno saw heroes who would only do their job for money. That disgusted her. When Konno tried to tell her parents about how she felt, they brushed it off, saying, “They need to support their family,” or “It’s fine, they’re doing it to save others, not just for the money.” They wouldn’t listen. The only one who would was her brother, Kotake. He understood. They didn’t see eye-to-eye, but they understood each other. Konno eventually got tired of no one listening, leaving to find the League of Villains. While she help them, Kotake made it into the U.A.’s class 1-A. She made a vow to herself to not let him know who she was, so wears a mask to hide her identity. Konno also won’t hurt him directly, but won’t hesitate to hurt his friends. She joined the League of Villains after Stain was captured, swearing to herself she would help the League of Villains finish what Stain started.

Other Info: She is a villain, she has a twin named Kotake who is a student in Class 1-A, has the same quirk as her brother, but is able to hide her exact quirk by using a lighter (yes she carries a lighter around all the time)

Name: Kotake Haniko

Alais: Youso (Literal Translation: Elements)

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Pansexual

Blood Type: B-

Appearance: Short dark black hair, orange eyes, 5’8, oval face shape, thinner eyebrows, small nose, more of a triangle body (slim and more muscular), out of school normally wears a pastel shirt and jeans. His hero suit is a simple black skin tight tank top and shorts. He also has a belt with a knife and a lighter.

Personality: Kotake is bubbly, energetic, and sweet. He is pretty awkward, but that doesn’t keep him from being outgoing and social. Kotake is easily embarrassed and apologizes for everything. He will listen to other people, but feels he is unable to tell others about his problems and worries, feeling like he’ll be a burden on them.

Quirk: Elemental Manipulation- When he’s surrounded by an element, he can manipulate it to a certain extent. If used for too long, he will be out of breath, thirsty, unable to stand upright, and/or will feel burning hot. It can lead to fatal consequences if used too much.

Backstory: Kotake had the dream almost every young child had, to become a hero. He looked up to All Might, but loved Thirteen and Eraser Head. He loved Thirteen for her ability to save people. Kotake loved Eraser Head for his quirk and for his amazing battle strategies. When Konno, his twin sister, told him about how she felt, he listened to her unlike their parents. When Konno ran away from home, Kotake was mortified. He had always been able to talk to Konno about his troubles, but now she was gone, so he had no one to tell his worries to. When she wasn’t found for a few weeks, and eventually months, Kotake realized she wasn’t coming back. Years later, Kotake was able to make it into Class 1-A of the esteemed U.A. High. He was going to be able to live out his dream!

Other Info: Has a twin sister named Konno, is a student in Class 1-A at U.A. High, he has the same quirk as his sister

@Delta-The-Dark-The-Spoopy-Bean-Seed-Plant-And-Proud-Supporter-Of-Aizawa's-Teaching-Methods

Name: Juno Priest

Gender: Fluctuating (Male and Female. Born a female, she's genderfluid.)

Age: 16

Sexuality: Pansexual

Personality: They are a broad minded, somewhat childish teenager who prefers pronouns "he", even though she is obviously a girl. Shes very quiet and reserved on first meetings, and generally prefers to keep to herself, as shes often teased a lot about her sexuality and her genderfluidness. However once she opens up to you, you'll find someone with a very vivid and sparking personality.

Quirk: She can drain the life force out of inhuman living things, (plants, animals, etc) leaving the world gray and almost like dust around her. She can then use this for a variety of things, be it to conjure a gray weapon, use the actual energy as a shield, or to heal others (Not fully, nor can she heal herself). This quirk is also somewhat dangerous to the user, as when they drain the life force from the earth around them, it drains their own life as well, varying with how much they take from the living.

Background: She grew up in a small town with her father. Her mother was a hero who was killed, leaving her and her dad alone. Her dad, once a hero, quit after losing his wife, and now works as a doctor. Sher herself, wanted to become a hero, not for herself, but for her mothers legacy. Her dad however, was never fond of this. Knowing this, she ran away to join U.A high. She is scared of her own quirk, which is the one her mother had. She watched her mother do great things with the same quirk, but ultimately it took her life. She scrapes by in the bottom levels of her class, afraid to use anything more then the basics of her quirk, afraid she will end up like her mother, but at the same time… It tears her up because she knows she has to use it to become a real hero like her mother was.

@LeafyLemur

This is all my opinion, you don't have to follow any of this, I'm just giving you advice I think would help :)//

First of all, a quirk name would be good as I'm pretty sure all quirks have a name. Secondly, the quirk seems a bit OP even with the drawback. To fix that, maybe their quirk is they can transfer the life force from something into something else, no conjuring weapons or shields. Also, I don't know if this is the case, but maybe the amount of life force something has fluctuates, for instance, a blade of grass will have less life force than a fish, a fish will have less than a cat, and so on. I like the backstory, that's a good basic backstory. Also, I noticed there isn't an appearance, that would be a great addition so we can know what they look like.//

Sorry if I went a little overboard! I hope this was helpful, but remember, you don't have to use all, if any, of my advice :P//

I'm sorry if it wasn't good critique ;-;//

@LeafyLemur

I think something that could help them heal teammates would be fine. For combat, she could be training in martial arts, somewhat like Ochaco.//

@Delta-The-Dark-The-Spoopy-Bean-Seed-Plant-And-Proud-Supporter-Of-Aizawa's-Teaching-Methods

//Alright, that may work. One thing brought to meh mind though with the quirk, would it be better if, like you had said, was a soul healing quirk? Or switch it the other way as the soul ability to make a weapon? Or the soul ability to make like a shield of sorts? Like a temporary forcefield of sorts, but one that can most defiantly shatter if struck hard enough

The reason I ask is cause I took everything I had said and broke them each down into their own quirks.

Healing.
Weapon conjuring.
Shield creating.

Which do you think would work best?

@Delta-The-Dark-The-Spoopy-Bean-Seed-Plant-And-Proud-Supporter-Of-Aizawa's-Teaching-Methods

//Alright. hmm… my only real issue now is trying to figure out how that could be used in say a spree, or how its proven fatal. My idea with something like the weapons and shield was: That sense the life energy is created into something physical, it needs a host or something to contain it, thus being the user. Kind of like a… like a nuclear reactor in a way. It builds up until its released. So when she had something being used, it holds the energy in her. The longer its used, the more pressure builds up. So when the thing was dispelled, so was the built up energy. Too much of that energy stored up however, would have the effect of say like, a nuclear meltdown.

So how could we register something into the healing aspect? Do you have any ideas?

@LeafyLemur

ShadeStar! Hi!! :D//

So, the way I'm reading that is you need a way to make it fatal? How about healing makes the user lose some of their own life force if they don't have enough life force to heal the amount they did?//