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I'd like some feedback on my creatures the Piivara, any advice on improvements or lore head cannons would be wonderful!
I'd like some feedback on my creatures the Piivara, any advice on improvements or lore head cannons would be wonderful!
First off, I love fantasy "record keeping" type novels, especially with fantastical creatures and body horror stuff, so I love the Piivara a lot. I do have a question though, if they stay in the same spot for a long time, why are they so rarely sighted? I mean, if they rarely move, wouldn't they be sort of like exciting attractions, where tons of people would come just to see them? Other than that, I think this is a practically perfect fantasy cryptid/creature
Thanks for the feedback! :D I also adore body horror and just had a ton of fun making these. To answer the question these creatures are SUPER rare. Like one "appears" every.. Say five years or so, and they only live a few months so its kinda hard to track them without modern technology being invented and only a few wizards being interested. But your absolutely right, so I'll probably put some kind of mentions of like, attractions popping up I could totally see someone shilling a few villages into paying for "protection" from a beast or some carnies stealing one for an act! Thanks again! :D
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