forum Writing/character building exercise:
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Take a big moment in one of your character's backstories, (say, they win a competition, death of a loved one, discovering superpowers, etc.) and retell it through the eyes of another one of your characters! What would they see in that moment? Would they try to approach character A (the one who's backstory it is from) at all? If they would have been at that moment originally? If so, what part did they play in it?
Idk, I'm bored and this seemed like a fun way to stretch a character's viewpoint. Go ham!

@Oakiin

Oh ho ho, this will be lovely. I'm actually really into this. Scene: Dakota realizes the people they've come to trust have been using them the entire time, and are doing sketchy stuff similar to what got Dakota's parents killed a long time ago. This is a culmination of betrayal and trauma that leads to Dakota finally snapping, only written from the pov of one of their closest 'friends.'

Finley frowned as she saw Dakota standing at the edge of the trees talking to…Grease? Flynn? It was hard to tell, the night's dim moonlight making too difficult to pick out any detail. Either way, she found it odd. Shouldn't Dakota be asleep by now? Normally they were early to turn in, and early to get up, while the rest of the team would stay up late and then sleep in.
She checked her watch to make sure it was actually as late as she thought it was, and felt even more confused when her watch told her it was one thirty am. Dakota definitely should have been in bed. Finley started to feel like something was wrong, but as she made her way towards the talking pair, Dakota suddenly shifted, reaching out and offering a sheet of paper to….Grease. It was definitely Grease they were talking to.
Alarm bells started to ring in Finley's head as Grease took the papers with clear puzzlement. This was wrong, something inherently bad, but she couldn't figure out how, or why. Maybe…maybe they were talking about a weapon plan? The two often worked close together in the shop, but it was so late, and something about Dakota's stance gave her chills, even though they stood casually.
Well, Finley had been a soldier for long enough to learn to trust these kinds of feelings. She started forward, just as Grease spoke, his voice sounding oddly high with fear.
"Now, Dakota, this isn't what you think it-"
He never finished the sentence. Dakota shifted, punching Grease as hard as they could, felling the taller man in one blow. Finley began forward, giving a shout.
"Dakota!" she yelled, going full drill sergeant. "What the hell are you doing?"
Dakota turned to face her, their expression entirely blank. She faltered, coming to a standstill as they bent down and picked up the paper that had fallen from Grease's fingers as he'd been knocked out.
"Maybe you can explain this," they said, almost pleasantly. "Before I decide to rip your head off."
Finley took the paper, nervously staying a distance she hoped was out of range. She could hear the camp stirring up behind her, roused by her shout, and hoped reinforcements would be here soon.
Oh. Oh, crap.
"Dakota," she began as calmly as she could. "Listen to me."
"You'd better make it good," Dakota said, their voice trembling with a fury she'd never heard from her normally quiet, collect friend.
"I know this looks bad," she said, raising her hands peaceably. "I know this looks like we've been using you, keeping you in the dark. But we didn't have a choice. We are trying to stop the people who killed your parents, I promise that's never been a lie."
"Right," Dakota said. "You've just been using the stuff they've found out by doing stuff like…killing my parents. Using that. Seems kinda crazy, you think? Seems like whoever said that thought it was pretty funny." They gestured to the paper held in Finley's hands, a call record between Grease and their contact in the military. She glanced down at it again, all the incriminating evidence Dakota might need to shatter any trust they'd ever felt for the team written out in bold.
"Look," she said, trying to reason with them. "You know how Grease is. He can be an idiot-"
"Look," Dakota cut her off. "I don't care."
Finley swallowed feeling genuinely nervous. Where's the rest of the damn team? she wondered, a little desperately.
Dakota stared at her for one more second, all friendliness and familiarity gone from their cold face. They looked how they had when she'd first approached them; tired, stressed, mistrustful and with some slightly unhinged gleam in their muddy eyes. It was scary. But they'd worked together for years, surely they wouldn't-
She hadn't realized they had a knife. She had time to scream, then Dakota stabbed her in the face, driving her to the ground with the force of the attack.
She was dead before her head hit the ground, the long blade piercing right through her eye and driving through her skull into the ground as Dakota used all their weight to push it in further.

Dakota heard Flynn and Norton running towards them, drawn by Finley's scream no doubt. They tried to pull the blade back out of her head, but it was stuck, and they had to give up, standing and stalking back towards their machine shed. They heard Grease give a groan from the ground and paused, considering him. It didn't take them long to ensure he'd never get up again, snapping his neck with one well-placed, decisive kick before carrying on their way. They only needed one thing before they could kill the rest of their 'friends.' And when they got it, they would be unstoppable.

@AloeVera groupMentallyImInACottage

I actually am writing a story where I plan to circulate through four different perspectives. I have a possible ending for one of my characters (spoilers) where I wrote it from the perspective of one of the other characters. Since I still wanna participate in the exercise, I'll paste the first perspective, but then I'll write from the main perspective!
I know this isn't exactly what you meant, but it inspired me and I think that's what you were trying to do!

(Also,,,,myabe trigger warning: bllood and death)

First Perspective: About One Character, from the Perspective of Another Character, this is the first one I wrote
"He says he knows you personally." He uttered, a hint of confusion in his voice as he held eye contact with me.
"Bring him in, then," I mutter, my position comfortable and my voice powerful as I sat on the throne.
He nodded and bowed before returning to the door. The echo of the doors opening resonated around the large marble room. Two men dragged another man through the hall and down the floor. Blood dripped every so often, leaving marks on the marble. His head hung low and he struggled to hold onto consciousness as his entire body remained limp.
But…his bright hair prevailed to be painfully undeniable. The two men tossed him forward until he was merely feet away from me.
His glasses fell to the floor.
"He's managed to kill dozens of people before we caught up to him."
I stood up, my heart racing the moment I laid eyes on that hair. I needed to hold my composure in front of everyone, so I inhaled deeply and slowly.
"Do you admit to these crimes accused of you, Nameless Killer?"
He heavily lifted his head, eyes dark and dejected, two different colors of blood staining his clothes, allowing a grin to surface as he spoke.
"It wasn't my fault."

Second Perspective!

I suppose the consternation that deeply resonated in their sore eyes may incline to moral justification at face value, but their violent kind planted the bad seed, to begin with. The bleak pain that overruled every possible inch of my battered body rendered me unable to cause any sudden disruptions, which may explain the lack of bindings as the two guards impatiently awaited her verdict.
I slyly inspect one of the guards, blood dripping from my bruised nose and head.
"You know, your ancestors aggressively implemented this identical, treacherous act upon my innocent family. Should we properly enforce this uniform law to that massacre?"
I scarcely managed to cough out, though my hoarse throat ached for me to hold my tongue.
He scrunched his disgusting nose toward me and furrowed his scowling brow.
"Maybe they should have finished the job."
The third guard abruptly opened the decorated doors, intentionally exposing the large throne room residing on the other side; this is precisely what she worked diligently for.
"The Queen says to bring him in."
He announced briefly and quietly, inevitably provoking the other two to proceed to carelessly grip the bleeding edges of my ragged clothing and lugged me into the grand hall.

As they reached the glorious end of the magnificent hall, the guards instantly dropped my filthy clothes, tactfully leaving me to slump to the polished floor, irrevocably losing my already broken glasses.
"He's managed to kill dozens of people before we caught up to him."
I hear her move, but my unaided eyes remain on the gleaming floor as she inhales sharply.
"Do you admit to these crimes accused of you, Nameless Killer?"
I replay the unconscious memory in my head, of that same face, that same voice, assuring me that my family's death wasn't my fault. The same voice gently reminding me that her demise wasn't my fault. Their preventable deaths weren't my fault.
I tilt my cold head upwards to gaze at her; she's radically changed. Political power will critically affect anyone in such a gruesome way, even the lionhearted.
"It wasn't my fault."

@I-make-stuff

First day of school in a new town. Math class, period three.
I just walked into this class, and I'm already bored. The bleariness of first and second block has worn off, and boredom has set in. I didn't get a lot of sleep last night, so my thinking is still a little fuzzy, but now that I'm at least somewhat awake, it's really sinking in that I'm going to be here for five more bland hours before I can leave.
And tomorrow will be the same.
Ugh.
I walk with defeated strides over to one of the corners of the classroom (front left, to be specific), take off my backpack, and sit down, twiddling with my thumbs. Maybe I should take out my botanical notebook, or my architectural sketchbook. Those have always been comforting. I pull my botanical notebook out and flip through it, wondering if there's a plant that can make me invisible.
The nature of plants has always been interesting to me, considering my… condition.
It's also the reason I don't want to get close to anybody. I feel like a freak.
Luckily, it's my first day at a new school, and I don't know anyone, so I'm nailing the 'being alone' thing. I don't like the solitude, and the loneliness is really getting to me, but I'm a lot better off without other people and the world is probably better off without me, too.
A girl and a boy, who I gather are siblings, walk through the door, somehow appearing to be enthusiastic about their first day of high school. They are accompanied by someone else who I assume is their friend. All three of them were in my past two classes, and I didn't pay much attention to them because I was too busy fighting to stay awake.
As they walk closer, I notice that the siblings have differing eye colors. The girl has one eye that is blue and her other is brown. Her brother has the same thing, except his left eye is green.
Huh. That's pretty cool, I guess. I realize that I'm staring, and I examine some of my drawings and notes on invasive species in New England that I studied over the summer.
I turn back to the entries on native flora, because the term "invasive species" is how I would describe myself in relationship to the human race.
They scan the room, and start coming towards my corner of the room.
They come close enough for me to catch their conversation, but that doesn't have to be really near, considering the girl's voice carries quite well. The girl asks her brother, "Hey Theo, what do you think we could do in this class?"
He replies, "Well, according to the polls I sent out to the student body, this teacher does absolutely nothing. So we could do basically anything."
"Hmm. Alright then, let's see what we have to work with," she muses.
They come over to my corner, and I look away, hoping they'll leave. Last thing I need is open, friendly people reaching out to me.
I stare out the window, pretending to be lost in the well-forested and radiant fall landscape outside, but I feel a shadow creeping up to me. I hear the same voice from earlier, now much softer, gently ask, "Hey, do you mind if we sit here?"
"Oh! Um, sure," I say, not wanting to be rude. I felt uncomfortable even with the small interaction, and it bothered me to think about how I've basically forgotten how to talk to people properly after being a loner for all of middle school.
The girl sat to my right, with her brother behind her and their friend to her right.
People continued trickling in, and the girl resumed talking with her brother, pulling some blueprints out of her bag, as he did likewise.
How did they fit those huge blueprints into their bags? I wonder. Well, it's not like I'm interested in them. Until my eye catches what's on the blueprints.
It was a completed building design, and to an architecture geek like me, it was genius. It seemed to be some kind of art or history museum, but not like anything I'd seen before. Where on Earth did they get their hands on those blueprints? I refused to believe they made that.
The girl looks them over, and seems pleased. "Theo, while I love this iteration of the original design, there's a measurement issue here." She taps the blueprint lightly. "We'll check again later, but we won't be able to execute that until we look it over again."
Wait. Does that mean that these kids intend to build that? I thought they were ambitious with the design, but actually creating it would be insanity. The best kind of insanity.
The bell rings with a soft and surprisingly pleasant ding, ding, ding. Which brings me to the fact that the teacher hadn't arrived, but nobody seemed concerned. Other than our little cluster in the front row, the rest of the class was in the back of the room, chatting among themselves.
"Well, that's my cue." The girl casually rolls up her brilliant plans and returns them to her bag, which is comfortably sized but still seems to be small for its contents.
She catches my eye as she notices me gawking at her, and says, "Oh, I didn't introduce myself! I'm Chelsea, my brother is Theo, and our friend is Cody."
Cody puts up his hand in greeting, and I feel like something is off, until it dawns on me that he has six fingers on each hand.
Huh. They're kind of like a ragtag bunch of misfits, almost like every band of protagonists in those fantasy novels I read during rainy days to escape reality.
Misfits. Like me, I guess.
I realize that I've been looking at her without responding, so I say, "Um, hi! I'm Meryn."
I hesitate, and then blurt out, "Your blueprints were really cool."
"Hey, thanks for noticing! Yeah, it's kind of what we do. We build stuff and go on adventures, and then do it again. Speaking of, Theo, do you want to build an observatory on the roof?" She points to the roof of the lower levels, which was located comfortably below the window.
Okay, there's no way that she could actually pull that off, right? That's ridiculous.
She pulls out some more oversized blueprints with the design of a small observatory on them. It was rounded, housed a powerful telescope, and pretty impressive for some kids who haven't even completed a whole day of high school yet.
I can't help myself. "There's no way you're building that in this one class period, right?"
Chelsea winks and says, "We've got our ways." She gestures towards the window, revealing that the observatory is already there. I had just been staring out that window less than ten minutes ago - the fact that it was there now was physically impossible.
Unfazed, she opened up the window and climbed out onto the roof. Theo and Cody followed her lead, unconcerned. She headed towards the observatory, stopped, and started back towards the window. She stuck her head back into the classroom, and asked "Hey, Meryn, do you want to come with us? I mean, you don't have to if you don't want to, I just didn't want to leave you behind if you wanted to come." She seemed to be genuinely interested in having me come along, despite us only having met a few minutes ago.
I hesitate, thinking about how bizarre the events that just happened were. And then, against my own good, I decided, yes, I want to do this. I can busy myself with how what just happened is completely and utterly impossible later. I can let myself have fun for now.
I'm sure this is just a one-time thing, them being nice to me. I can go back to being a lone wolf later.
I put my botany notebook back into my bag, and climb awkwardly through the window, lacking the grace that she had just a moment ago.
I'm helped down onto the roof, and follow her into the observatory.
It's filled with futuristic-looking tech that looks like it's from NASA, not like something that high schoolers built in one class period.
I'm amazed, and confused, and don't know where to start. So I ask, "How… how'd you get this here, and onto the roof? Did you build this yourselves? What just happened is impossible. Did you-"
The girl laughs a little, and says, "I'm grateful for all of the questions, but slow down a little and let me answer them first! Anyway, I'll give you the short answer."
She is silent. I look around for a moment, and then murmur, "Are you going to tell me?"
"Oh, sorry. I was just imagining some epic, dramatic fanfare in my head… yeah, I know it's stupid. Anyway, our little secret is time travel."
That was the moment I knew that there was no going back to solitude.