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Wow it seems like everyone's asking this but would you mind critiquing my character?
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@72concernedbees
tune
people_alt
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barabara
You're character is on private
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Seems good to me. The only thing is if she's a lawyer then she'll have to know about all that 'scaring' stuff so maybe make her so that she appears innocent and pure (and maybe kinda still is) but once in a while makes a comment on something and you find out that she isn't. Sorry if that's no help but it actually looks really good.