forum Would anyone like to critique this small family unit? ^^

Started June 28, 2019 by @Kaloobia

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Undine (she/her): Undine
Kasey (he/him/they/them): Kasey

Some context: The story takes place in an alternate universe, modern-day Los Angelos. No one really knows where superheroes, or their powers, come from: few offer themselves up for research, they're not stupid after all. But heroes (and villains) range from mutants, to magic coursing through someone's system, to simply having heightened natural abilities.

For now I'm focusing on these characters as people, though I have started developing their supernatural aspects. I'd appreciate a critique of their individual personalities, and/or how compatible you find them to be as a family, if their personalities meld well, if they're cohesive in relation to each other, etc.

Thank you so much in advance to anyone who takes an interest! ^^

I'm not that good at critiquing, but here, I'll boost it lol
Your plot (world thing idk im tired) seems pretty cool tho

I'm not that good at critiquing, but here, I'll boost it lol
Your plot (world thing idk im tired) seems pretty cool tho

aha thank you ^^ to me it seems like any other superhero world haha, i'm more interested in the character psychology and the burdens and keeping secrets, but thank you for your interest!