forum would anyone be willing to critique my character?

Started October 19, 2018 by @glowingwithpride

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i'm writing a story for a language arts class and i just need someone to look over my character and tell me if she's realistic or not. here's the link, Mary sharon Antijunti if you are able to just let me know.

I would love to help you, however your link won't let me get to your character. I'm not sure if you need help; anymore but if you do, I'd be willing to help.