forum What do you think of my OC?

Started September 15, 2020 by Deleted user

tune

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Breaks down door

Otay so I got one OC. Yay

So her name is negative and she's gothic as CRAP. She sports a bang cut with medium length hair and barley talks, when she does its low and deeper for a girl. This guy used to work with her (Their bf and gf)and they were referred to as "Roller Demons." They rolled around and shot people out of nowhere until one-day negative went missing all a sudden and the guy that worked with her got all sad and found a new team to work with. Then 6 years later she showed up again out of the blue and with a new attitude. She still loves the guy she worked with but that guy doesn't love her back. So now she's all sad and stuff and I don't know where to go from there. So LOL good luck. Im also not good with details so even more good luck.

I feel like they should have a reason for 'shooting' people. Are they psychopaths? Even so, what triggered that?
It seems a bit underdeveloped and I feel like they need more reasons, like why she went missing and why the guy doesn't love her.

Yeah its still a work in progress, but the reason why is because its WAY in the future and they can shoot people for sport. The guy doesn't love her anymore because she just went missing and left him, so ya. She went missing because of unknown reasons(yet) but ill figure somthing out

Its just a quick summery