forum Way To Give My Character Depth?
Started by @jantz
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@jantz

I've been working on her for over a month now and she still seems to be lacking a clear personality, any tips?
(I'm also in the middle of fixing her background so it's kind of a mess there)
Alice - Alice Carpenter

@M.W.Poel

I'll try

  1. Quick question, is light blond like almost white platinum or more of an ashen grey blonde?
  2. Nice spell descriptions
  3. It might be you feel she's lacking personality because in the social tab you're really hammering on the social anxiety thing but then sort of don't really let it show through subtle in the other things. it's either very clear in the spotlight or not there at all. That's how I read it anyway.
    Sadly, I'm not sure how you can counter this other than just starting on a first draft to see where it goes and work from there. It is going to be very difficult to work out every little detail before you ever start the story.

I think I commented on her before so I'm not entirely able to read it with fresh eyes. Getting a second opinion is recommended. :p

@WaffleWizard

thanks friend, i'll try and make her anxiety more consistent.

This just made me laugh. It's the kind of thing that hopefully only writers would say