forum Trying to make my character as real as possible (critique)
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@AloeVera groupMentallyImInACottage

Yes ik this is such a quick response I promise i wasn't refreshing the forums a n y w a y

Overview
First of all, I absolutely adore the Pinterest board you have for her. As someone who is also unbelievably attached to her characters and applies memes, aesthetics, and other various fun things to their OC's, I'm loving this. (Cough just saying I've got a Pinterest board for my OCs as well as my friend's OCs my user is Aloe Vera juST SAyin)

Looks
WeLP 121 lbs for a 5'3 girl seems a bit underweight, is that intentional? The average weight for a 5'3 female is around 125-130 lbs. I believe.

Nature
Hey I was literally playing with my hair when I read the mannerisms thanks.
So it's not like you need to justify her prejudice, but it could also help to explain it further! What's her biggest problem with complacent people? (Edit wow look at that you answered this and I totally don't critique as i go whoops) Is there anyone in particular that she dislikes because of this, and are they the example she gives when talking about such things?
Also the beginning of the personality tab is a callout post to me coolcool

Social
Mmm gotta love them agnostic characters. A good way to aid in this is to explain why she's agnostic. Yes, often times it's a matter of "this story isn't focused on religion", but if you want to create a character, you need them to have a worldview, and if you need a worldview, you'd need to back up your view on religion. Also, considering the personality of this girl, if she's got a political stance, she might have many reasons behind her political belief.
why doesn't she have a favorite food cmon man mine is taquitos
Okay basically with all the favorites, you can ask why and then use that as an answer.

History
Am i willing to read all of Waite's history? i actually don't know but i might post this before I read it haha
also this is going before i read Waite's history but a little bit more of a background could explain Lizzie, like when did she realize she's bisexual? Also i read lesbianism and my brain said "that sounds like a religion"

Misc
g a s p you have a playlist for your ocs toO I'm in love thanks

Okay so basically I love this OC and I highkey am loving the way you portray her and describe her. I understand I couldn't find much to actually critique but I'm supposed to be asleep so of course I wanna critique your character this was fun thank you