@PhillipAllmon
Writing a story with multiple POVs and this is the first character I’m making public for critique. Honesty is appreciated! Will post more characters and background to my world as it goes.
First Character up: Torrah, the Lion of Khala
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Torrah, The Lion of Khala (Character Critique)
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@Yamatsu
Sounds awesome! I think this character has plenty of room to grow within the context of the story, and he really feels like Spartacus. All I want for this boy is to snap his chains by hand and fight his way out of the Pit and into the waiting arms of the main party. He sounds and looks awesome, I can't wait to see what you've got in store for this guy!
@PhillipAllmon
Sounds awesome! I think this character has plenty of room to grow within the context of the story, and he really feels like Spartacus. All I want for this boy is to snap his chains by hand and fight his way out of the Pit and into the waiting arms of the main party. He sounds and looks awesome, I can't wait to see what you've got in store for this guy!
Thank you! I put some real thought into this guy and I’m glad you see the Spartacus inspiration for him! He’s gonna be a fan favorite for some and the worst person ever for others!