forum Thoughts on my male protagonist

Started February 23, 2018 by Rain

tune

He's not completely fleshed out yet so I'm totally open to any suggestions!

He seems good, but can you flesh out his other species a bit so it’s more understandable? My character Reggie is also fancast as Sebastian Stan!

Because he's beautiful! <3

I think he's really well designed! He has good talents, flaws, and a nice backstory. Very believable. ^^ Can't really give many suggestions except perhaps work on his relationships with others, like friends vs enemies vs coworkers etc. Idk if you did that already, but there's my two cents ^^

I think he's great! You added lots of good detail and information!

oh my god i just ADORE him! his looks and nature is soooo good, great backstory!
my only tips are maybe put in somethings he loves, like food, favourite clothes etc
Besides that he's amazingly fleshed out!

Yes he is beautiful!