Alice
I'm not looking for anything super long or in depth, though, if you're willing, I'd really appreciate it. Even if it's something small and to the point I'd be happy but please be honest and critical.
Thanks in advance :)
(please also be aware that the background section is a major WIP)
Hello!!! Overall, I think your character is amazing! I read almost all of it and skimmed through the longer paragraphs. Im sorry if I ask a question that you already answered but this is what I got… (BTW these questions arnt very good but at least they are something to think about!
1) Under Alice's conditions it mentions her having to keep her powers a secret… Is witchcraft not common where she lives? or does she not know she is not alone?
2) I skimmed through the background and have some questions… It says somewhere she stole an army jacket from her foster dad before she ran away. Is there a specific reason its an army jacket? does it bring back memories of something? what was the last straw of her running away? where was the first place she went after running away?
That's all for now… I hope this was helpful. I can give more feedback when I read your character closer! ; )