forum someone please write me a cute scene
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@AloeVera groupMentallyImInACottage

i have a quick question; in the title, you said you wanted it to be a cute scene? so did you want someone to write a scene about an unwanted pregnancy and a breakup in, like, a cute way?

@tay_sweetwriter group

Sorry lol I see how that's confusing. I meant like with the guy trying to be cute and telling her that she will be okay and all that and shes like, "nope" byeee yk?

Karen

So the dialogue could be like this for example "Babe I need to tell you something?

Boyfriend: Sure whats up? [he could be taking his glance of something]

Girlfriend: I'm Pregnant

Boyfriend: [eyes widens arms on hips and sighs] Wow… I mean

Girlfriend: Are you happy?

Boyfriend: Uh yeah but don't you think its a little early to have…?

and then you could add more in-depth dialogue that if you want. I hope you like it.

@requiemisback language

ooh this seems interesting- here's my take on it

"Well, you see," the girl spoke carefully, walking closer towards her significant other. "I'm pregnant." The slightly younger male took a step back, uttering a few phrases in complete gibberish as a means to try and comprehend this information. "You- what- you're- huh?" he stammered, unable to find the right words.

"Mhhh…" the girl grunted in response to the male's constant blubbering. "I was thinking… I think now it's best that we go our separate ways." This comment made the male's onslaught of stutters grow stronger and heavier within moments of it being said. He then shook his head, his nerves slowly settling. "Wait- You can't just leave. There's a life inside you. I get that the pregnancy is sudden, but-" And just then, she cut him off.

"I'm sorry, my love, but there's no other choice. I think both of us aren't ready for this kind of commitment. It's obvious that our only other option is to sever our ties with each other until the baby is born. Then I'll give it up for adoption, or something along those lines." The male suddenly poked and prodded his way back into the conversation, "No, I think we are ready! We've been dating for god knows how long, so we can't just end it because of a kid, right?"

The female shook her head. "I'm truly sorry. This is just the way it has to be," she said as her soft, porcelain-like hand reached for the doorknob leading out of her lover's house. From thereon, he would never see her face again.

@tay_sweetwriter group

This is my final decision :)

She snuggled closer into my side and rested her head on my sternum, wrapping her arms around my waist, trailing kisses up my neck.
I sighed, groaning softly.
“Einar?”
“Hmm?”
She rolled over onto her back so that she was no longer entangled in the thin blankets with me. Goosebumps broke out along my bare arms from the cold night air. I turned onto my side so that I could see her clearly, propped up on my elbow.
“What’s going on in that beautiful head of yours?” I asked, tracing her cheek. She flinched at my touch, a tear slipping down her face.
"Well…" she spoke carefully as If taking great care to choose her words, "I'm pregnant."
I pulled backwards, uttering a few phrases in complete gibberish, trying my hardest to comprehend this information. "You- you're- huh?" he stammered, unable to find the right words.
She grunted in response to my blubbering. "I was thinking… I think now it's best that– that i go back home”
I pressed the pad of my finger to her lips, wiping the water droplet away with my thumb, “Please. Don’t do this, not after everything–”
She grasped my hand and held it to her own mouth, lingering until it was warm, “I can’t hurt you”
Her voice was so small I could hardly hear her over the quiet chatter around us, “What do you mean?”
She let go of my hand and stared directly into my eyes, hers violet like the sunset.
“Emerson?” I breathed, fear gripping my core. My leg shook as I waited for her response, head spinning. Her last comment made my onslaught of stutters grow stronger and heavier within moments of it being said, "Wait- You can't just leave. There's a life inside you. I get that the pregnancy is sudden, but-"
And just then, she cut him off. "I'm so sorry sorry, Einar but there's not really any other choice. I can’t– I can’t be with you because… because… I need to give it up for adoption or something we can’t just–”
"No, I won’t let you do this. I think we are ready! We've been dating for god knows how long, so we can't just end it because of a kid, right?"
She took my chilled, shaking hands in hers as I reliazed what she was getting at. Her eyes welled with tears, “I’m so sorry. I never– I never wanted to hurt you”
“Who is he!?” I spat, searching her expression with a crazed look on my face, “The child isn’t mine is it?”
The female shook her head “No”