forum Show me your characters and I'll tell you my favourite thing about them!

Started April 17, 2023 by @Leatherfaceofficial group

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Send a link or just describe your characters and I'll let you know what I like the most about them :)

omg hi so i have a few characters who i love,,, maybe you'll love them too alsdkfj

(Damn MJ you beat me too it 😭)
Helooo here's one of my newest characters that for some reason has the most fleshed out profile-

And he's Jackson my beloved but his profile is unfinished lmaoo-

uhhhhhhhhhhh my characters kinda suck and are mostly incomplete but i think my two mostly completed ones are Eyrie and Nikita (my protag and antag). Good luck finding stuff you love about them lol

My two favorites??
Buckley

Julian, he's VERY not fleshed out but I love him anyway

Same story with Reiner, I also adore him but he's not super fleshed out <3

My two favorites??
Buckley

Julian, he's VERY not fleshed out but I love him anyway

Same story with Reiner, I also adore him but he's not super fleshed out <3

Dude, fuck, I read through all of these and you've got my exact sense of humor and I absolutely love the little notes here and there! On that note, I would die for all of these characters on the spot. No questions asked. I know I've said this before but I fucking love your writing style and your characters are all top tier, they're the exact type of characters I would favorite in a show, movie, and/or book <3

go ahead and take my man he needs the ego boost

Heres my probably undeveloped characters:
Isa
https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/1218693/edit#/:~:text=https%3A//www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/1218693,
and Carey

Dude, fuck, I read through all of these and you've got my exact sense of humor and I absolutely love the little notes here and there! On that note, I would die for all of these characters on the spot. No questions asked. I know I've said this before but I fucking love your writing style and your characters are all top tier, they're the exact type of characters I would favorite in a show, movie, and/or book <3

RRAAHHH omg thank you so much??? My lil heart ;w;
Right back at you tho, your such a good writer with such cool ideas and Cherry is an awesome character.

Omg I forgot about this I'll go do them all now :)

@Larcenist-Arsonist
For Abel, I love the "gore fascinates them, they're very violent" and "collects plants!" in the same box. We love someone with hobbies! Also them watching trashy 70s movies (me) and throwing carrots at Paisley. Them turning into vapour when they're excited sound so cute too! Their aesthetic too! All around a solid little person. 10/10

I love how Cagney sharpens her eyebrows to be more intimidating, that's kinda hilarious. Her having beef with an entire country seems iconic and/or traumatising. I love her powers too, very nice. Even just her name is great! Another solid gal, 10/10!

Shea had Garfield-orange hair. Need I say more? I will anyway. Her motivations being like "find herself", "destroying a guy", "work through her trauma" and then just "have fun :)" I love it 😭. Having gum in the backpack at all times as well is such a mood. Another very good character! 10/10. I don't know why I'm rating them lol.

I love love LOVE your whole character pages (I snoop through them sometimes for inspo..). You put so much effort into them and it's just so PSHJSKHPS I LOVE THEM.

@Larcenist-Arsonist
For Abel, I love the "gore fascinates them, they're very violent" and "collects plants!" in the same box. We love someone with hobbies! Also them watching trashy 70s movies (me) and throwing carrots at Paisley. Them turning into vapour when they're excited sound so cute too! Their aesthetic too! All around a solid little person. 10/10

asdlkfaj omg thank you so much <3 abel's my skrunkly blorbo and i love them so much. im so glad you like them too alsdkjf giving him a plant hobby was really funny and I stuck with it

I love how Cagney sharpens her eyebrows to be more intimidating, that's kinda hilarious. Her having beef with an entire country seems iconic and/or traumatising. I love her powers too, very nice. Even just her name is great! Another solid gal, 10/10!

she just wants to be big and tough (small and young) she's my scary lil antagonist, im so glad you like her

Shea had Garfield-orange hair. Need I say more? I will anyway. Her motivations being like "find herself", "destroying a guy", "work through her trauma" and then just "have fun :)" I love it 😭. Having gum in the backpack at all times as well is such a mood. Another very good character! 10/10. I don't know why I'm rating them lol.

shea is so silly and goofy and that's so iconic of her thank you so much

I love love LOVE your whole character pages (I snoop through them sometimes for inspo..). You put so much effort into them and it's just so PSHJSKHPS I LOVE THEM.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAA thank you so much aaagh that's so good to hear <3 ajsldkfjakldfjj thank you again!!

@Seeba
Oleander - I was really enjoying myself and then you drop the "he has a fatal illness and less than 3 years to live" bomb and I was like WOAH?? I was loving this dude… RIP in advance Oleander 😔 8/10.

Jack - Ouuu he's one day off of my birthday what a shame. Could have been an instant 10/10.. Love how you have the time jumps on your stories so you can see them in all the different times.. inspired. I had to search up Conduct Disorder to make sure he wasn't gonna die too omg 😭.. Like you said you haven't finished the profile yet, but I'm loving it so far! 7/10 :)

Someone pleak remind me later to do the rest of these because it's really fun! :)

Dude, fuck, I read through all of these and you've got my exact sense of humor and I absolutely love the little notes here and there! On that note, I would die for all of these characters on the spot. No questions asked. I know I've said this before but I fucking love your writing style and your characters are all top tier, they're the exact type of characters I would favorite in a show, movie, and/or book <3

RRAAHHH omg thank you so much??? My lil heart ;w;
Right back at you tho, your such a good writer with such cool ideas and Cherry is an awesome character.

Haha thanks, I made Cherry with a friend of mine so I can’t take all the credit- I love her to death tho
But yeah dude, your stuffs really cool!

@Seeba
Oleander - I was really enjoying myself and then you drop the "he has a fatal illness and less than 3 years to live" bomb and I was like WOAH?? I was loving this dude… RIP in advance Oleander 😔 8/10.

haha, his death is a pretty big part of the plot, so I'm afraid that won't be changing anytime soon. You can still love him even if he's dying, i think building a love for a character unwillingly while knowing in the back of your mind that they're gonna die can create a very visceral connection with the character.

Jack - Ouuu he's one day off of my birthday what a shame. Could have been an instant 10/10.. Love how you have the time jumps on your stories so you can see them in all the different times.. inspired. I had to search up Conduct Disorder to make sure he wasn't gonna die too omg 😭.. Like you said you haven't finished the profile yet, but I'm loving it so far! 7/10 :)

would you be up for a second review once I finish his profile? I keep getting distracted by other things but I do really need to finish it.

Do you have any critiques that would help up their scores?

Can you look at my characters Akira , Raptor , or Poppy Solace , if you don't mind

@Seeba

Haha I agree with you there! Killing characters off after getting to know them so well can actually be a good idea sometimes. I'm sure it's great for your story! And I'll totally be up for reviewing Jack again, just let me know when you're done. There's not really anything in particular I would say would make them any better or anything, they're both great characters! :)

@shadowstar31
Sure thing! I'll get round to them soon hopefully :)

@manerd_alert
Empress Eyrie sounds a bit terrifying and I think I'm in love with her. Her name being an anagram of Nikita Reyes?? Genius. I love it! Also very nice she lets her employees live in her castle. Seems like a very top-class villain!

Nikita just seems like such a nice person! I feel bad that her friends were trying to kick her out of the friend group, that happened to me once lol. I don't know anything about K-pop, but the fact that she can identify someone based on their lips? Unhinged and I love it.

@Dayzed
Buck is TALL oh my God. "He's a closeted Hufflepuff hiding in a Gryffindor's skin" that's such a good metaphor?? In love. Him looking tough but being awkward… AHHH I love this guy.

Julian is a whole foot smaller than Buck omg. A tattoo of a bird on their stomach is cool! His sleep habits seem very different, I'm intrigued!

Reiner's favourite weapon being how hot he is. Love a huggable, blunt hottie!

I wish I could say more but I'm very sleep deprived, but they're all so cool! :)

@Dayzed
Buck is TALL oh my God. "He's a closeted Hufflepuff hiding in a Gryffindor's skin" that's such a good metaphor?? In love. Him looking tough but being awkward… AHHH I love this guy.

Julian is a whole foot smaller than Buck omg. A tattoo of a bird on their stomach is cool! His sleep habits seem very different, I'm intrigued!

Reiner's favourite weapon being how hot he is. Love a huggable, blunt hottie!

I wish I could say more but I'm very sleep deprived, but they're all so cool! :)

@William haha, not my characters, though I wish

@Dayzed
Buck is TALL oh my God. "He's a closeted Hufflepuff hiding in a Gryffindor's skin" that's such a good metaphor?? In love. Him looking tough but being awkward… AHHH I love this guy.

Julian is a whole foot smaller than Buck omg. A tattoo of a bird on their stomach is cool! His sleep habits seem very different, I'm intrigued!

Reiner's favourite weapon being how hot he is. Love a huggable, blunt hottie!

I wish I could say more but I'm very sleep deprived, but they're all so cool! :)

AAHH thank you!! I love them all so much, yes, Buck is a Big Big Boy and I love him for it <3

Julian is slowly turning into a feral beast again, he copies his sleep patterns off wolves ^^ he is constantly sleep deprived lmao

Reiner is such an icon, I adore him to death an back, big squishy king 👑
Thanks for looking at them!!

@manerd_alert
Empress Eyrie sounds a bit terrifying and I think I'm in love with her. Her name being an anagram of Nikita Reyes?? Genius. I love it! Also very nice she lets her employees live in her castle. Seems like a very top-class villain!

Nikita just seems like such a nice person! I feel bad that her friends were trying to kick her out of the friend group, that happened to me once lol. I don't know anything about K-pop, but the fact that she can identify someone based on their lips? Unhinged and I love it.

haha thanks. i'm still pretty new to all this stuff so yeah glad you took the time to read them since they're both really long lol

as for the anagram, basically, they're like the "same person" but from different universes, with eyrie basically what nikita will become if she doesn't grow and change as a person (if you notice the flaws, they have the some of the same ones). there is little bits in my story that will allude to this but at the moment its mostly empty cus uni is kicking my ass and i have no time for worldbuilding cries

(also niki was my first character and i started her page before i knew about markdown so that's why her page started out so messy and i apologise that you had to go through that lol)

Here goes nothing. My characters suck.
Death Note: Satoka and Aiichi Aburadachi
Creepypasta: Sasha Lebedev
DC: Hailey Zolomon