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This is a thing where you can put your characters on display to critique or talk about. Whether with links to the page, or simple written descriptions like I plan to.

@Yamatsu

I quite enjoy my Half-Dragon boi, though I feel like I need some help fully fleshing out his powers. Some help would be much appreciated!

Here's his dog, just because.

And his main weapon, just to get a sense of how he tries to fight.

barabara

I have a girl named Aurelia, she' not very fleshed out yet. She's mostly In my head, but she grows up a thief and an orphan on the streets of a major city in my fantasy world. She gets caught stealing from a maid working for the castle and the maid decides to turn her into a servant. Aurelia grows up with a whole community of foreign servants teaching her, so they taught her they're language and made her nick-name Sona Li. Aurelia grows o love books, knowledge, and has a natural curiosity. She's very smart and Is most often in the castle library. The next part of her backstory us kind of a work in progress but she basically gets sold to a noble who is abusive and won't let her leave his chambers. During this time she develops magic that sparks from her seeing the high priestess and reading books. When she discovers she can complete incantations, her magic fully awakens and she starts having nightmares of her powers overwhelming her. When the noble finds out he quickly finds her a tutor and uses her secret as leverage to make her obedient. This changes when she meets Rie, a stoic warrior that found her way into the kingdom and becomes hell-bent on freeing Aurelia.

@Fyrebird

This is the main girl in my current story

This is her friend

And this is my second girl's brother

@AJMaskell

My main character has a crazy backstory and life. Her birth name is Dana Cicierega, and at age four she escapes her home with three of her siblings (Alearie, Alyria and Vanyen) as her family is attacked and consequentially killed (So mum (Atlantys), dad (Edmund), Jaren, Malia and Axon are all executed). She then travels across the continent with her remaining family to a new country (Traveling from Hyrat to Cavisle). She is then separated from Alearie and Alyria and is left with the company of nine-year-old Vanyen, who is soon caught by the authorities and executed too. When Dana is seven she is picked up by this dodgy guy (Neran), to whom she goes by the name Little Bird. Neran trains her to be a spy/assassin and sends her off to infiltrate the palace at age ten (At the palace she is known as Bryir Felick). She then befriends the Princess (Shasta) and assassinates the king. Over the next few years she does lots of spying and assassinating and meets her love interest (Amrick), she also sees Alearie and Alyria one more time before they are executed after being caught. When she is eighteen she tells Shasta what she's been up to and is banished from the palace. Dana then sneaks back in to save Shasta from a murder plot and ends up telling Shasta, Amrick and Neran that she is Dana Cicierega (Neran had been searching for Dana for years so that he could kill her too). She then runs around the continent and ends up pretending to be the person of a legend in The Cove (Here she is known as Frost). She runs around the place a bit longer and forms her own society for people with magic (Here is where Amrick finds her). Amrick then convinces her to go back to her birthplace with him, forcing her to confront her past.

That's basically all I have for her, minus a few bits and pieces.