@tazu group
I'll try to give an honest opinion on them, no shit like "oh I think this character is great!" is gonna be said. So send in your characters!
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tune
people_alt
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@KingWafflzilla
Darrian Scrax Lanchaster Hope he's any good! I would expand way more but I don't have the premium service.
@WriteOutofTime
heyooo here's my newest girl
redplanet
Heyy
I need constructive criticism so thank you. This is my protag, Parker.
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@Kinarymo
Hey q3q
mind taking a look at my villain? Tell me what you think
thx <3
@tazu group
Hey q3q
mind taking a look at my villain? Tell me what you thinkthx <3
This sounds like a pretty decent villain character. Their background is okay, revenge is a thing for a main antagonist, and the design looks a little bit intimidating. The character is okay and well thought out.
7.5/10
@tazu group
Heyy
I need constructive criticism so thank you. This is my protag, Parker.
Invalid Character Thx!!
She reminds me a bit of a friendly doormat. Sure, she can care about her friends and family, but what about herself?
She's kind of a shoujo protag (goes to high school, cares a LOT about her friends and very polite).
The design is okay (though I would like to see it illustrated instead of getting a random pic of a girl on the internet), and the personality is kind of okay (??)
7.4/10