So I'm j chilling in a coffee shop and I want to look at other people's characters but don't even know where to start SO if you want a character critique drop something below! I would love to do rather general critiques, or check out something specific if that's what you want!
Thanks!
Ah yes, hello, can u take a look at my babu pls? thank u. an overall critique is fine though advice is also very welcome q3q
HENLO your character is very fun! I really like how you managed to be really detailed about so many aspects of them while also keeping a really neat air of mystery about them! Reading up on them really made me want to learn more about your universe, since there are some terms in there I am not familiar with! I also love the artwork for them! Super good. There were a few things I did not understand which is totally natural considering I don't know all the details of the story. The only thing I can think of is that I would maybe expand what kind of illusions and magic they do to trick people. Do they put people in a trance? Hypnotize them? I would just be interested in what kind of magic they do and more of the extent of their abilities! Overall super intriguing character.
Hi! There is not so so much here to critique. What's in the notebook isn't really enough for me to get to know the character. I would consider filling in the page more, especially the history section so there's a bit of an idea as to what is going on within this character's story (what the conflict is, really). It would also be neat to just have a pic or two in the gallery. :)
Hi! Mind critiquing my little rebel girl?
Hey! Your character sounds like a baddie haha. I like the sound of the vibe she's giving for sure. For what you have she sounds interesting but it would be helpful to know more about her actual story. You definitely have a lot for the personality section so I think it would be cool to include the root of some of those things - why are they true? Why is she a sweetheart who is easily loyal but also kinda full of rage at the same time? I think that is an interesting dynamic, so, just adding bits and pieces like that. I am just always curious as to what makes people the way they are!
Hi hi! ^^
Mind if I drop in a few? If you’re closed or too busy that’s fine!
Ivy:
Kai:
I think I’ve got them pretty fleshed out, but if you see anything let me know!
Even just your opinion on them is fine! Ty!
A yes, henlo again. Ty for the critique u3u
If im allowed, may i send another? My chaotic snake son u3u
Hey! You have some really fleshed out and rounded characters. Nice! I like that they are friends who experienced different upbringings and lives but still managed to come together. I am definitely interested in the story - maybe you could add some notes or something that briefly describe in bigger detail what's going on in this world of yours. (That info is probably found in your universe page but I can't see it.) From what I know of the two of them, though, they seem like you have put a lot of thought into them. I especially like Ivy's design, and I love seeing a female character who is a bit more sensitive, kind, etc. as opposed to a forcefully aggressive female protag. Maybe you could fill out the social and history pages a tad more. Great job!
oH mAn bRo. So I'm not one of those people who likes villains really, but I'm kind of in love with Hiryur? He reminds me of the type of villain that isn't pure evil but rather jovial. You absolutely packed the page with info and I feel like I know everything about him that I need to know. This is really just a super fun, well rounded, interesting character! I like that he was part of a travelling circus and likes plushies!! and I love his design! and he wears heels too. All around good snake boy 10/10 would be his friend. I am big intrigued!
I'm still up for doing critiques :)
I was unsure if i could just bomb u with all my kids so i kept waiting :'D
Heres my sweet pea demon boi uwu (dw if u dont get his thought process, neither do i lol)
Hey there! Mind critiquing my newest child? I only came up with her about a month ago so she may be a little underdeveloped :)
Hi there! If you’re still taking critiques, could you please share your thoughts on my girl Arrabella ? No rush, just whenever you find the time !
hey, mate! im revisiting a few character concepts from a few years ago for a revamp of one of my old stories! I am sad to admit that this used to be a major Larry Sue, and I dont want to fall back down the rabbit hole. if you have a spare moment it would be awesome if you could glance over this and give him some feedback? hope you're having a nice day/afternoon/night!
Hi there! If you wouldn't mind, Dashan might be cool to critique!
Meet Dashan! Invalid Character
if it's possible, could you critique any of my girls?? thank you so much in advance
kacey: kacela zlata langford
nabila: nabila meihui chan
karuko: karuko masae