forum Please judge my characters, Veronica and Daniel.

Started July 25, 2018 by @Glossy_gemini

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I am open to any criticism that you have.

Hi @Glossy_gemini ! You will need to set your characters to public for people to see them.

Overall for Veronica, I would give her stronger flaws that complement and reflect her motivations and strengths. She wants to protect her friendships than maybe one of her flaws keeps her from achieving that. I would also add more to her background. How do her parents treat her? What are her favorite memories? What parts of her past effect who she is today.
I have much of the same critiques for Daniel. He needs stronger flaws that can complement his strengths and motivations. I'm not really clear on what his motivation is. Does he want to have a great future family? How does that affect him on a daily basis? His backstory could use some more detail too. How does his past effect who he is today?
On the whole' you have two great characters that need some more detail and fleshing out
Hope this helped! Happy writing!