forum Please, I crave your feedback on my new character!

Started August 05, 2018 by Rachel

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This is a really good start to a character! This really makes me feel good vibes. You are doing a good job showing the balance between having her work hard and spending time with her hobbies. When it says personality type, try checking out the Myers Briggs personality test. It could definitely help. Adding a bit more detail and taking out some unnecessary ones would be a good choice, just when looking at it. Like try looking up shards of skin color, like what you did with the note on her foundation color. Also, when it shows her favorite animals; perhaps write down calm large dogs, instead of "dogs (not small yappy ones)". But otherwise, nice job!

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked her and I really appreciate your constructive feedback!