forum Please help me improve my character.

Started August 13, 2018 by Deleted user

tune

Please help critique my character Malconis (Malconis Everbeth-Godel ). It would be a big help.

You need to set the page to public so people can see that. You can do that via the three-connected-dots button next to the red edit button on your character's page.

Please help critique my character named Hikaru Sakuraba. Hikaru Sakuraba

@Riorlyne thanks for letting me know, its public now

@somanyfrickinoreos
Under description you say scars, where are they on his body? Where did he get them from?
What are some of his insecurities?
What does highly educated entail? College? If so what degree did he earn?
I like that his favorite weapon is his wits and the art of him is really good!