forum Please critique my character?

Started May 24, 2018 by @Paperok

tune

Hey, I think the character you have here is good. Mostly I just want to see him in the story! it's all well and good to outline how a character acts and thinks and looks, but at the end of the day it's all about how they are presented within a narrative. I like the character's personality, I don't think he is too perfect or flawed, so I think it's time to write his story!