@Ok_Kaii group
Here you go! don't go easy on him lmao.
Here you go! don't go easy on him lmao.
I'm glad that he is an appropriate weight for his age. A lot of the characters I critique are either 20 lbs underweight or 40 lbs overweight.
@Pidgepocalypse
Thank you! anything else to say about him??
Im really bad at critiquing characters sorry
Starting with his name, I like it a lot, it has this futuristic vibe around it, but also this wood vibe thing? I don't know but I love it!
Also love that he isn't like 5,9, a lot of male-characters that are grown-up are always tall. This is a nice change for me to see haha.
The blue-ish skin+ white-ish eyes is really cool, really interesting aesthetic. Is this because of his race or are his white-ish eyes a special thing only he has?
The glowing part when happy is great!!! Does his skin get darker when he gets sad/anxious? because that'd be so interesting!
If he's so reckless, does that end in like scars/wounds a lot? is he a fighter or just like really clumsy? The flaws are realistic and fit really well together. The fact that he's a prince fits as well, like you can imagine such a person to be cocky and so on easily.
You say one of his hobbies is learning, but what does he learn about and how?
Well that's all my comment+ questions, I think he's very interesting, well rounded+ aesthetic haha. Great job!
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