forum Opinions on my Protagonist?

Started March 01, 2018 by Angel

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If anyone could give me their opinion on my protagonist of an up and coming story, I would be very grateful!

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I enjoy the amount of detail, and thank you for the opportunity to have a taste of your world. Very intrigued now! The background looks incomplete. Love your descriptions, she seems like she could take names any day.

I really like her. She seems powerful in an unusual way, which is a nice change of pace from the female protagonist who is loud and always fighting. I'd be interested to know more about her motivations, like what happened to make her feel the way she does about the world. She seems to be well developed and interesting! Great job!

I really like her. She seems powerful in an unusual way, which is a nice change of pace from the female protagonist who is loud and always fighting. I'd be interested to know more about her motivations, like what happened to make her feel the way she does about the world. She seems to be well developed and interesting! Great job!

Thankyou!

I enjoy the amount of detail, and thank you for the opportunity to have a taste of your world. Very intrigued now! The background looks incomplete. Love your descriptions, she seems like she could take names any day.

Thankyou! I am yet to complete her background :)

She is very interesting. I always enjoy a protagonist who doesn't win through having inhuman combat ability. I would like to learn more about your story!