forum Need some help! Critique my characters

Started May 27, 2018 by Kai

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I have major writer's block help!

Thanks!

Complete all the outlines for your characters, it will make all of them more complete even if you don't use the detail outright. For Calian, add more to flaws and hobbies, and fix the typo in favorite possession. For Fyra, add more to nature and social outlines. Koro and Nikko also need to be updated in nature and social outlines. Also is Rowan the second Angel of Death? Did she follow Ceetra?

Thanks for your help!